Ruins and Roots

I've been breaking apart
walking backwards and crawling
catching pieces of my heart
as I realize I'm falling.

Love left bleeding in my hands
some think I've never met it
vanishing like the sand
their words are truly pathetic.

Label my acts black or white
we'll be attended like digits
coveting the ruins of rights
that have become cold and rigid.

Sweet moaning and candy weeping
I've made myself knight of sorrow
I stop only when I'm sleeping
to cry a bit more for tomorrow.

My senses exceed statictics
my feelings are farther, complete
i don't need strict politics
to know this world can't compete.

Longe live Bohemians salute!
Society is made for rejections
veins longuing for icy blue
heart ready for disaffections.

Fasten the world to your shoes
when pains in your mind say
I know well what I should do
but I just can´t walk away.

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Me gustó tu poema, especialmente esta parte inicial;

I've been breaking apart
walking backwards and crawling
catching pieces of my heart
as I realize I'm falling.

That's pretty good, congratulations.
A appreciate the way you structure your poem, I think is a good poem overall.
See you soon.
Alaric.