Shipwreck

[center:3a99fa64c0]SHIPWRECK[/center:3a99fa64c0]

[center:3a99fa64c0]In the depths of the ocean of my thoughts
Hidden from Time and its dreadful clocks
Never aging, never healing, their hearts sadly diced
Dwell my ghosts and prayers, forever crystalized [/center:3a99fa64c0]

[center:3a99fa64c0]Melodies of dew drops falling from the feathers of a dove
Seeking me desperately, purely out of love
Seeping into my deep, cruelly aching wounds
Soothing me carefully, like a mother would[/center:3a99fa64c0]

[center:3a99fa64c0]Cause I'll always live in my bittersweet past
Among lullabies and smiles that never last
Leaving behind my life's colourless thread
Forgotten like a shipwreck, left without dread[/center:3a99fa64c0]

 

At first I wasn't sure if the other poem was a repeat, but I see that's diffrent.  I just simply liked your style. You have a beautiful way of combinig the verses...Always a pleasure to read you

XOXOXOXOXOX

 

Nice, very, very nice, okay maybe beautiful, your bitterweet dead past seems to condemn your future to follow suit, and die before is born, sad indeed, a pleasure reading.

 

You used really beautiful words! Great poem