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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Israel JM, Mar 23, 2019. Replies: 3 | Views: 577

  1. Israel JM

    Israel JM Poeta recién llegado

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    Stand by me
    Nobody knows
    The way is coming to me

    I stay with you
    All the world knows
    That I feel the future is coming

    The sun will rise
    And we'll repeat the rain
    Rain of pain, pain of love

    You told me hang out with her
    Show me how to make it
    I'm bored of this life
    But for you I will try

    The night is here
    And please, leave me
    A world is falling
    My soul is dying
     
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  2. Jazmin blanco

    Jazmin blanco Invitado

    Hermosa melancolía destilan tus versos, estos son mis preferidos, creo que son el alma del poema.

    The sun will rise
    And we'll repeat the rain
    Rain of pain, pain of love

    Saludos cordiales.
    Jazmín
     
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  3. Ulpiano

    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    Your romantic poem with a good touch of spite, dear friend and poet Israel, is full of paradoxes.
    Nothing it can be do: So love is!

    With my congratulations, a big and fraternal hug,

    Ulpiano
     
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  4. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    I'll take the rain in any form it can come in, in your pain and that's ok.
    It was a pleasure reading your inspiration.
     
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