Sometimes

mmm... k les podre decir m gustaria k m dijeran k les parece fue un momento inspiracion bilingue jajaja i pss si sta mal skrito o algo pss apenas mpiezo en esto dl ingles:::wub:::

SOMETIMES

Sometimes when the sun goes away
and the stars begin to shine
I just can think
about what I want
about what I feel
about what I've done for you
ooooh ooooh my love

Sometimes when i'm falling down
and my heart is hurt
I just can think
about what I feel
but I really know I haven't fought enough for you
but only I'll say... I love you to much
i'm sorry oh my love... I love you to much

Sometimes during a rain
I try to write a little poem
but I just can think
about what i'll say
about what i'll do
next time i'll see you my love

And the time has arived
and i wanna sing
giving you a kiss, touching your lips
and saying i love you my little girl...​

FERNANDO

 

fernando5, your poem is very good, u have inspiracion, but by doing it in English u left out a lot of people with out the chance to read it. espero que no te molestes, pero no hay lenguaje mas hermoso y complejo que el Espanol.
un saludo poeta.

 

Para nada me molesta tu comentario Adonis por lo contrario se agradece y tienes razon no hay lenguaje mas bello que el Español y estoy orgulloso de que sea mi lengua pero pues fue un momento en el que estaba pensando y m salio "todo" en ingles

gracias y un abrazo amigo
fernando