Still with love

I don't will forget you
Because you be my thoughts
My moments with you are few
Then tell me, I follow the rules?

Still with love
A platonic love
Inside of the magic grove

Someday you will breathe in my heart?
Any place is beautiful with you
Even the future
Even the past

In my own fucking life
You are the sunlight
You are my own star high
You are my own distant ride

Take me away of this world
Take me away of this machine
You burned my soul
You turned off my fear

Near you, away from me
Sitting next to me
In a place where I can feel
And tell you I love you

 

No te olvidaré
Porque estás en mis pensamientos
Mis momentos contigo son pocos
Entonces dime, sigo las reglas?

Todavía enamorado
Un platónico amor
En un guante mágico

Respirarás algún día en mi corazón?
Cualquier lugar es bello contigo
Incluso el futuro
Incluso el pasado

En mi propia jodida vida
Eres la luz del sol
Eres mi propia estrella alta
Eres mi propio paseo distante

Llévame de este mundo
Llévame de esta máquina
Quema mi alma
Apaga mi fuego

Cerca de ti, lejos de mi
Sentado cerca de mi
En un lugar donde pueda sentir
Y dite ( que) te quiero.

Me ha encantado tu delicado poema. Dime si lo he traducido correctamente o he desvirtuado su significado.
Saludos.
Jazmín

 

Dear friend and poet Israel:

You have written an excellent and very romantic poem. It is said that the human being, when he is truly in love, is capable of making wonderful poems, and you have fully confirmed it: your lyrical verses seem to be full of magic.

Otherwise, how could she breathe in someone's heart, if that someone were not arrowed by Cupid? How could past and future times become a place if love did not exist? Just to tell you a few wonders that make your poem beautiful.

Go ahead, you were born to be a good poet. I am pleased to offer you my sincere congratulations.
A big and fraternal hug,

Ulpiano

 

No te voy a olvidar
Porque tu eres mis pensamientos
Mis momentos contigo son pocos.
Entonces dime, sigo las reglas?

Aun con amor
Un amor platónico
Dentro de la arboleda mágica.

Algún día respirarás en mi corazón?
Cualquier lugar es hermoso contigo
Incluso el futuro
Incluso el pasado

En mi propia jodida vida
Tu eres la luz del sol
Eres mi propia estrella alta
Tu eres mi propio camino distante

Llévame lejos de este mundo
Aléjame de esta máquina
Quemaste mi alma
Tu apagaste mi miedo

Cerca tuyo, lejos de mi
Sentada a mi lado
En un lugar donde puedo sentir.
Y decirte te amo