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The Chronicles Of The Sour Life (Part II)

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 8 de Mayo de 2010. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 715

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    PART II

    Self Questions:
    Why it feels like I'm still trapped?
    Why it feels like I'm lost?.
    This world does not go with me.
    I hate the way darkness makes me feel so complete.
    And now I'm here.....the light is distroying me.

    I'm Sorry:
    I'm sorry for the way.
    I'm sorry for never tell.
    I just don't feel comfortable....just put me again downstairs.
    I'm sorry for all the time.
    I'm sorry for my return.
    I'm sorry for telling you....that this is not gonna change.

    Leave Me:
    It was a mistake...I shouldn't have returned.
    I thought I hated the dark..but it seems...is all I got left behind.
    I want the tears, please leave me.
    I'm not going to tell you "don't".
    I'm not going to change the world.
    I'm going to leave my life...want to be apart from you.
    People from above.

    to be continued......

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    Pemberley Winter
    I know what you are...You're gonna be bad for my bussiness...I can realise that
     
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    orees19 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    this poem remids me a soda's song... when you feel comfortable with yourself nobody can question about your feelings or manners... sometimes people don't see the beauty inside the darkness... inside fires... inside the abyss... nice poem Winter... it was a pleasure stopping in your lines... regards. Good luck.
     
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    Dear Orees,
    You are so right, sometimes people judge what is dark or different as something bad...ans they don't know that sometimes for others...can be great. Thank you so much.
    Pemb
     
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