THe one WHo MaDe Me Die

Everytime you look me in the eyes
You will think: I’m the one who made him die.
Everytime you wake up in the middle of the night
You will think: I’m the one who made him die.
Everytime you kiss me to say “hi”
You will think: I’m the one who made him die.
Everytime you listen to the silence
He will whisper at your ear: You’re the one who made him die.
Everytime you stare at the moon trying to cure your pain
You will remember that you’re the one who made me die

You will regret it, you wont forget it.
You will feel remorse and you won’t feel any joy.

Everytime you feel lost between nothing but darkness
You will remember my look full of sadness.
Everytime you see me in your dreams
I’ll be writting with blood in the walls that you’re the one who made me die.
Everytime you try to talk to the sea
He will only scream at you that you’re the one who made me die.
Everytime you see my bloodstaind
You will read in the blood that you’re the one who made me die.
Everytime you hear that song
You will only listen that you’re the one who made me die.​

 

it's a good write my friend, but i think, and it's only my opinion, when you repeat many times something, the poem becomes a little bit boring...
a hug friend
Fernando

 

por lo general zi, repetir algo muchaz vecez llega a zer aburrido, pero la fraze ke ze repite ez lo ezcencial en el poema, azi k me vi forzado a repetirla muchaz vecez. Chido

 

You are not dead.....You are just stone out of your gore...but I'll give you a brake for your effort...

..........peace