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Today I felt in the Grass

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Clear, 25 de Enero de 2023. Respuestas: 1 | Visitas: 276

  1. Clear

    Clear Poeta fiel al portal

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    Today I felt in the Grass
    I Was wanted lought: im free!
    Dont know why the houses Was so pretty and sweet....
    And i felt like im in this movie again...
    Bur the Grass is so real and the eir Smell so beautiful
    I just wanted breath again

    I loved walking for them...
    And between
    Within in me
    i see the flowers...

    This colors so Natural something plastic but beautiful!
    Walking and walking in the Grass
    Like the walking could be eternal...


    It's simple to me feel
    see the branches
    tied on the ground
    And felt so special
    trying to not fall
    Like a first time
    Like is just something mine
    I wanted said Hellow?
    In myself i thought "is Crazier..."
    Couse the three cant say anything...
    But ...
    But but Im insisted: Hellow?
    Like im encounter a knew place just to me...
    And Im become to me
    And i Said "obviously nobody said me Hellow here..." is just...
    Come back to the real life!

    But...Today I felt in the Grass
     
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    Última modificación: 26 de Enero de 2023
    A Maramin le gusta esto.
  2. Ermenegildo Tiraboschi

    Ermenegildo Tiraboschi Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Love it. It reminds me of Frank Zappa. On grass (syntax, spelling and other nuggets of, shall I say, uniqueness aside).
     
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