Vanishing away

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lluvia & rain
Suppose my thoughts no more a disarray.
Walk, dark my feet away once, twice, again.
those voices will likely bring me dismay
from digging deeper tombs I can’t abstain.

Taking a step into a gaze that strays
with flowers sitting, kisses on the lips.
A lethal kiss can make a death remain
a walk so lovely in a thought amiss.

Living day a day without regrets
forgetting, kiss the lips and think to stay
to catch the kisses falling from the bliss
and catch the wisps befalling, a dark day.

If sitting, thinking, kissing at death’s gate
there one could simply vanish a few days.
 
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ohhhhhhhhh April, I'm always surprise the way you can write just a few lines and at the end: make an excellent and brilliant poem.
I like very much the description of your poem. I can always see images in my head, all the kisses, all the gates.
hugs for you and congratulations.
Pemb winter
 
ohhhhhhhhh April, I'm always surprise the way you can write just a few lines and at the end: make an excellent and brilliant poem.
I like very much the description of your poem. I can always see images in my head, all the kisses, all the gates.
hugs for you and congratulations.
Pemb winter

Pem,

You never fail to leave a smile on my face..Your happiness is truly contagious.
I love reading your comments --thank you.

A huge hug.
 
Raúl Castillo;2844914 dijo:
Emotionally charged poem, with a great ending. A pleasure to read, thnx for sharing.

You are most welcome -emotions are an eternal downfall for some of us. For me, impossible to write without them : )

Thank you so much for the honor of your distinguished visit.
 
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I liked this poem so much!! I felt a special essence coming from inside. On every line.
A placer, Lady.
Regards, glory and stars for you.
 
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