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Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por poetaindagador, 16 de Febrero de 2006. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 1106

  1. poetaindagador

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    And it came, the expresion of the man
    from the deepness of the self.
    It was reflected in the blue lagoon
    that the moon light forced to shine
    with her volatile life. Explained
    every thing that there is to be
    below the illusory sky that shined
    and darkened the demonstration
    of the eternal mind of the man.
    A symbiotic being wanting to project
    just light brightly enough to
    blind all the other minds
    that shine around the spaceless
    continuous ephemeral time
    created by man who built
    their ordinary life in myths
    creations and beliefs
    so extremely that they can't
    realize that there is not reason
    or necessity to mind about
    abortions of the mind retaining
    simpleton explanations of what
    is around their sides.
    Who is the guy who runs all that
    (w)holly part of our minds and lives
    designed perfectly and beautifully
    wrong in our intricate selves?
    And the beating heart?
    Beats and beats unstoppably
    inside giving you energy to rise
    your body and mind so then you can
    action your apparently called soul
    which is the third part of the triangle.
    The final piece of the puzzle in the
    universe of the unknown answers
    the ones that are so obvious
    it makes it seem stupid to stop and
    contemplate their nature.
    As simple as who we reeally are
    beyond all that we think we are
    or what the fuck am I doing here
    in my mind living my life
    talking with my mind
    reading my words being
    born in this universe
    of enliven change
    brightly yellow life
    and deeply dark death
    perfectly disposed to us
    to travel around without
    just really a reason why.
    Why do we live I wonder...?
    But who cares really about that question
    maybe everyone/noone who exists
    and develops their mind.
    What is to care now is this eternal moment
    in which I'm creating an expression
    of the deeply insight of whosoever
    is running all that in which we are all
    involve and travel around {maybe called life}.
    This eternal moment inside which so many things
    happen and not happen they could happen
    or they probably happen but a certain part of those things
    just happens spontaneously here and now
    and why tell me why you creative mind.
    Maybe because the air blew south
    or simply because the stakes sat
    everything down to all that happens
    inside that eternal real momentarily
    timeless elapsed {time? life?
    mind? world? universe?
    existence? words? probabilities?
    lights? waves? suns?
    days or nights?}.
    Who nows really what is the real thing
    about anyways?
    Although for an eternal moment in shape
    a man came painted all the colors that were found
    in the serpent bucket {mind}
    this abstract image of life
    as organic as the sun comes
    with his violent sometimes soft
    energetic waves took something
    beyond that moment-less timeless
    a glowing beam of something
    unknown beyond all that I know
    something concrete in a profound
    mysterious and inquiring way
    of perfect flawed existence.
    And then all is done and in the end
    leaves everything undone according to
    what it was suppose to be.
     
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  2. I always enjoy reading your poetry in any language...

    xoxoxoxoxox
     
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    DEJAVU Poeta adicto al portal

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    Interesting work. Extremely broad.
    It hits a lot of buttons.
    You might want to edit your wording a little.
    Saludos,



    DEJAVU
     
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