What you left behind

​

Emptiness and space​

came to the eccentric root​

of my silence.​

And here,​

I've tried to avoid​

the darkest hour​

bushing against my thighs…​

…An endless desert of seclusion ​

carrying memories​

that were better off left dead​

and unnamed…​

But explosions ​

of pleasure drawn ​

with the shadows​

[COLOR=darkred]of your deaf fingerprints [/COLOR]​

[FONT=Palatino Linotype][COLOR=darkred]lift me up again[/COLOR][/FONT]​

[SIZE=4][FONT=Palatino Linotype][COLOR=darkred]on sparkling showers [/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font]​

[B][SIZE=4][FONT=Palatino Linotype][COLOR=darkred]burned on salt[/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font][/B][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font]​

[I][B][SIZE=4][FONT=Palatino Linotype][COLOR=darkred]to water the void [/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font][/B][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font][/I][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font]​

[CENTER][I][B][SIZE=4][FONT=Palatino Linotype][COLOR=darkred]you left behind.[/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font][/B][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font][/I][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font][/CENTER][FONT=Palatino Linotype][/font]

 

Beautiful thought.
Thank you for sharing with us.

By the way, nice picture.

Regards.

 

This is a great piece. Full of passion. Congratulations!!!
http://www.mundopoesia.com/foros/la-torre-de-babel/221624-field-of-memories.html

 

The intense whispers of your poem leave behind the pain and initiate a dance of solitude and loneliness, expressed immensely well by you. It is the heartache of the one you long for, somehow lifting your shield of memories and intruding in your heart once more. Sweet poem, the pain lingers on, Sweet One.

 

Thanks a lot Cesarfco, always a pleasure to see you here.
:::hug:::

 

My pleasure dear friend, and thanks again for your visit and tender words.
:::hug:::

 

Raul, my good friend, indeed it is all that, the sorrows that caught up with the memories that live within...
always a pleasure .
:::hug:::

 

[FONT=Palatino Linotype]Well the image you used it´s creepy, but i liked it :::sonreir1::: (yes I know it sounds weird)the first part (I don't remember quite well how to say estrofa in english) you opened with ís fantastic, since those three verses you have already a great poem so I can tell you this: You are officially one of my favorite writters here.
I would tell you that I'll be wauting to see more from you but I guess you already know it.
A pleasure to read you here and everywhere, hugs a lot for the pretty you.[/font]

 

i love the way you always writte with the soul and the tears of your heart...

its very emotional, i love it.

xxx and hugs

 

Ja, What can I say, I have a thing for that kind of pictures (after all im a weirdo) so that point is understandable...
And Red, I deeply appreciatte you reading this, I figured if there was one guy who would be able to give me a straight and honest opinion about it, well that person would be you!! 'cause I don't care what you say... I love your "senseless scripts", I guess we both know what it is to have this perception of reality with a twist...
Salud!!
hugs and kisses.
:::hug:::

 

Thanks Gigi, as always my pleasure.
hugs and kisses.
:::hug:::

 

Very good your poem with a great deal of sadness in it. It's a pleasure to read your pretty poem.

 

The pleasure is all mine knowing you enoyed it's reading.
thanks a lot J, hugs and kisses.
:::hug:::

 

Beautiful piece you have created. Thanks for sharing. Kiss

Esme

 

Thanks a lot Esme, for taking the time and stop by my letters.
:::hug:::