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Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Viten, 11 de Mayo de 2010. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 600

  1. Viten

    Viten Poeta fiel al portal

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    When you appeared my life changed.
    Your smile, your eyes,
    everything was wrong
    and my mind doesn’t see.

    When you appeared I died.

    When you appeared the sunflowers changed into black roses,
    the light couldn’t shine,
    the sky has cried every day, every moment.

    When you appear I lose, I cry.

    I’m loveless, and you… you are my demon.
    My hell is your presence and my heaven your eyes.
    When you look at me I can fly
    but when I think, what is the meaning of your see?
    I fall into the eternal night.

    You don’t love me, I don’t love you?

    I think… I don’t want to think!
    I only want to love to you.
    This is the only true, the ugly true.

    You love me? I love you.

    You want to me? I want to be with you
    but I’m only dreaming.
    If you wanted me I would know.

    When you’re appeared I know you’re impossible.




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    Excuse me if I wrote a bad words or ideas, I don't speak english but I like it.
    Thanks for read it. :)
     
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    Agua de luna Poeta fiel al portal

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    Just do it! We are reading your feelings. Be success.
     
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  3. RA

    RA Invitado

    Viten,
    Good poem. Everybody can understand what you meant. Although you don't speak English, you have the great sensitivity of a good poet. Go on, don't give up, you own the two most important things: you have a great vocation and wish to learn English and you are a high-quality poet.
    Congratulations.
    Fraternally,
    Ramiro
     
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