Whose Darkness

Hola a todos! Bueno pongo este poema que he recuperado que escribi cuando tenia 15 años, un saludo!!


The princess of darkness she says to be,
"wake up! wake up!" she just wants to hurt me,
that´s not what a lonely soul should do,
I´m alone as you.

Think about that darkness,
take your time,
the darkness could be the one wich could hide us
from the people who show off themselves in the light,
yeah... in an artificial light.


Prince, prince of others dreams,
don´t try to travel with me,
what i know would be your last street,
don´t misunderstand your map,
draw your route and see how straight
is compared to mine.


Mine is draw with a shaking hand,
and goes to areas out of the map,
with no streets, no colors, no sand.


No girl, look better on the map,
what you thought was your line,
is mine, I`m the one who trembles now,
you are others dreams...
and I´m the lonely one.

 

Mira vos, Toti me escribe en ingles tambien ... Por lo pronto te digo que hay mucho dolor y melancolia reflejada en esa soledad que se refleja en cada verso.
Te felicito, es un goce a la lectura. Para que aprendan los demas, ja !
Te mando un abrazote.
Richy.

 

I like it, I don't care what the critics say about it! thank you for sharing.

 

A melancolic fantasy. Its has been a pleassure to read it. Very nice poem. See ya Nomeck.