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Winter (Waiting Game)

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[center:265ea25d49]Winter (Waiting Game)


The sun hangs low
In this winter sky
All my tears
In these frozen times
Cling to me with such fright

Winter has arrived
To add to the weight of gloom
Up to now I have survived
In my heart there’s too much room

Thoughts of that black dress
Somehow carry me through another day
But surviving on this emptiness
Slicing apples, again

The rain falls on my face, so cold
Frozen, like knives of ice
Scraping down my face, untold
That has for so long tried to smile

But smiles are but a memory these days
Something I have long since locked away
But deep inside is the realisation
That she will end my deprivation

I’ll wait for you, of course my love
Everyday I’m burning up in flames
But wait for you, I know I should
Telling myself it’s just a game
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Hey, i thought there was a forum for poems written in "other languages", o well, sad verses and poem you have there, is like a sad memory that wants to be happy but your heart won't let it, anywho...although is sad, is pretty, well trimmed with sad words, i like the "realisation" that is giving you hope towards the end, i love those ends :D , sweet read.

Me gusta la forma que adornas con palabras tristes tus versos, pienso que parece una memoria triste que quiere ser feliz pero tu corazon no la deja, me gusta la manera que la esperanza se asoma casi al final de tu escrito :D , bonito escrito.
 
The rain falls on my face, so cold
Frozen, like knives of ice
Scraping down my face, untold
That has for so long tried to smile

No words to describe the beauty in a darker form this verse expresses...simply beautiful!

XOXOXOXOX
 
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