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Winter (Waiting Game)

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por avalons_king_bride, 23 de Noviembre de 2005. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 1223

  1. avalons_king_bride

    avalons_king_bride Poeta recién llegado

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    [center:265ea25d49]Winter (Waiting Game)


    The sun hangs low
    In this winter sky
    All my tears
    In these frozen times
    Cling to me with such fright

    Winter has arrived
    To add to the weight of gloom
    Up to now I have survived
    In my heart there’s too much room

    Thoughts of that black dress
    Somehow carry me through another day
    But surviving on this emptiness
    Slicing apples, again

    The rain falls on my face, so cold
    Frozen, like knives of ice
    Scraping down my face, untold
    That has for so long tried to smile

    But smiles are but a memory these days
    Something I have long since locked away
    But deep inside is the realisation
    That she will end my deprivation

    I’ll wait for you, of course my love
    Everyday I’m burning up in flames
    But wait for you, I know I should
    Telling myself it’s just a game
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  2. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hey, i thought there was a forum for poems written in "other languages", o well, sad verses and poem you have there, is like a sad memory that wants to be happy but your heart won't let it, anywho...although is sad, is pretty, well trimmed with sad words, i like the "realisation" that is giving you hope towards the end, i love those ends :D , sweet read.

    Me gusta la forma que adornas con palabras tristes tus versos, pienso que parece una memoria triste que quiere ser feliz pero tu corazon no la deja, me gusta la manera que la esperanza se asoma casi al final de tu escrito :D , bonito escrito.
     
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  3. The rain falls on my face, so cold
    Frozen, like knives of ice
    Scraping down my face, untold
    That has for so long tried to smile

    No words to describe the beauty in a darker form this verse expresses...simply beautiful!

    XOXOXOXOX
     
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