One autumn afternoon

[lluviadeabril]

To rise and fall with you
on a bed of golden foliage,
one autumn afternoon
counting sins and stars anew. ​

All is peaceful when I rest on those leaves
where you write autumn springs.​

It is there that thoughts grow
and I’m meek.​

 

[Mask]

ufff...no se..ingles..me los traduces en un mensaje privado porfa?

llluvia fina y elegante del atardecer, enamoras los paisajes del alma que me vió nacer.....saludos..

 

[orees19]

love is like going with the flow... so easily... so calmly... such a nice place you've found... liked it hehe... regards.

 

[yOnOsoyEva]

Melodious and sensorial verses...What a pleasurable fall...

It was nice reading you.

yOnOsoyEva

 

[Jorge Serra C]

Hola muy lindo tu poema, pero a pesar que esta en ingles, deberias revisarlo para que sea mas fluido , pienso yo.saludos

 

[Pemberley Winter]

I loved Autumn, you know..it is a season to be calm, to think, and knowing is cold, is a very good season to love, to be with the person we feel comfortable. Everything must take its course in a very soft and calm way. Excellent poem April....very relazing.
hugs, Pembb

 

[lluviadeabril]

I loved Autumn, you know..it is a season to be calm, to think, and knowing is cold, is a very good season to love, to be with the person we feel comfortable. Everything must take its course in a very soft and calm way. Excellent poem April....very relazing.
hugs, Pembb

Dearest Pemberly,

Your words elate the heart and flatter the pen. I share your fondness for the landscape on an lazy afternoon where calm of thought brings peace of mind and all is, but a short walk to surrender will and sip the quiet through the eyes.

Thanks for sharing such a view.

Hugs.

 

[lluviadeabril]

Hola muy lindo tu poema, pero a pesar que esta en ingles, deberias revisarlo para que sea mas fluido , pienso yo.saludos

Gracias compañero,
Lo estaré considerando, agradezco sugerencias ya que la fluidez para mi siempre es un reto.

Un abrazo.

 

[Leónidas de Rosario]

la simpleza de las imágenes me apasionó..besos

 

[lluviadeabril]

ufff...no se..ingles..me los traduces en un mensaje privado porfa?

llluvia fina y elegante del atardecer, enamoras los paisajes del alma que me vió nacer.....saludos..

Un dia de estos, Mask. Un dia de estos - lo traduzco.

Un abrazo.

 

[lluviadeabril]

love is like going with the flow... so easily... so calmly... such a nice place you've found... liked it hehe... regards.

What a kind comment. Thank you, I'm so very happy you enjoyed it.

A hug.

 

[lluviadeabril]

la simpleza de las imágenes me apasionó..besos

Gracias Poeta, un halago de los más grandes su presencia y comentario.
Un abrazo cariñoso.

 

[lluviadeabril]

Melodious and sensorial verses...What a pleasurable fall...

It was nice reading you.

yOnOsoyEva

On the contrary, thank you so much for such a wonderful comment.
A hug.

 

[Gauss]

Would you mind to write me an autumn spring, my beloved Rain ? La he hechado mucho de menos. Sonrío ahora que la leo de nuevo.

 

[lluviadeabril]

Would you mind to write me an autumn spring, my beloved Rain ? La he hechado mucho de menos. Sonrío ahora que la leo de nuevo.

I am in utter disbelief!

Welcome back and of course, I would not mind.

An autumn spring starts with the warmth of your visit
long lost Poet and follows in the kindness of your words.

A hug and a reciprocal smile.

 

[D347H]

I'd like to be on that leaves too...
A placer to read you, Lady.
Regards, glory and stars for you.

 

[lluviadeabril]

Melodious and sensorial verses...What a pleasurable fall...

It was nice reading you.

yOnOsoyEva

I'd like to be on that leaves too...
A placer to read you, Lady.
Regards, glory and stars for you.

What a sweet comment.

A hug.