Emotion

[Poeta Calljero]

Today i feel alot and at the same time nothing, i want to run but the rush keeps stopping me, my soul is gone but my mind knows where to find it, my shirt is off but theres still nothing, whisper my name and ill be there, granades keep blowing in my head, my mind keeps fading away, where to go? Where to stay?, what difference will it make?, my mouth is big and my tounge is long, my words dont have return, i burn in your arms, the wind marks your name in the sky, the only soul, my only joy, Religion you are, for your kisses i will give my life.

 

[Ulpiano]

Today i feel alot and at the same time nothing, i want to run but the rush keeps stopping me, my soul is gone but my mind knows where to find it, my shirt is off but theres still nothing, whisper my name and ill be there, granades keep blowing in my head, my mind keeps fading away, where to go? Where to stay?, what difference will it make?, my mouth is big and my tounge is long, my words dont have return, i burn in your arms, the wind marks your name in the sky, the only soul, my only joy, Religion you are, for your kisses i will give my life.

Your story is very interesting, dear friend "Poeta Calljero". Do not forget that "I" is written with a capital letter. Also do not forget to write the apostrophe in "don't" and in "there's".
It's "a lot", it isn't "alot".

Cordially,

Ulpiano

 

[Maramin]

Confundido se siente el escritor y solo sabe refugiarse en el beso que es su vida.

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Estimado Poeta Callejero. dado que su tema esta escrito en prosa lo paso al foro correspondiente.

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