Twilight song

[silveriddragon]

I just wanted to stay with you
but you didn't see me again
my dreams never came true
maybe it is only a farewell.

Many people say I'm crazy
because you are in my thoughts
and now I realize
that isn't a reality
you are only my eternal muse.

If you only know what I feel inside
maybe you can read this
with another point of view
That's something singing
a song for you on the twilight.

Please, stay with me
at the bottom
of this precious sea.

The shadow, the nightmare
those are nothing
I don't efface them
if I can see you at the end.

A rose, a nightingale
sing this song
but I hope
this is not a farewell.

Please, stay with me
at the bottom
of this precious sea.

 

[Ulpiano]

I just wanted to stay with you
but you didn't see me again
my dreams never came true
maybe it is only a farewell.

Many people say I'm crazy
because you are in my thoughts
and now I realize
that isn't a reality
you are only my eternal muse.

If you only know what I feel inside
maybe you can read this
with another point of view
That's something singing
a song for you on the twilight.

Please, stay with me
at the bottom
of this precious sea.

The shadow, the nightmare
those are nothing
I don't efface them
if I can see you at the end.

A rose, a nightingale
sing this song
but I hope
this is not a farewell.

Please, stay with me
at the bottom
of this precious sea.

I consider that your poem (or song?) is very beautiful, dear friend and poet "silveriddragon",
This poem of yours with a touch of spitefulness but with an exquisite romanticism. It would only
need the background music to turn it into a beautiful song, with the liric chorus which reads
in inviting the loved one to stay with you at the bottom of a beautiful sea.

Would there be something more precious than the nostalgia that appears in your verses?

With my congratulations, a big and fraternal hug,

Ulpiano

 

[DESIRE SOLE]

I just wanted to stay with you
but you didn't see me again
my dreams never came true
maybe it is only a farewell.

Many people say I'm crazy
because you are in my thoughts
and now I realize
that isn't a reality
you are only my eternal muse.

If you only know what I feel inside
maybe you can read this
with another point of view
That's something singing
a song for you on the twilight.

Please, stay with me
at the bottom
of this precious sea.

The shadow, the nightmare
those are nothing
I don't efface them
if I can see you at the end.

A rose, a nightingale
sing this song
but I hope
this is not a farewell.

Please, stay with me
at the bottom
of this precious sea.

Bello poema Silver, es conmovedor. Saludos. FELIZ FINDE, DESIRE

 

[DESIRE SOLE]

like también.

 

[silveriddragon]

I consider that your poem (or song?) is very beautiful, dear friend and poet "silveriddragon",
This poem of yours with a touch of spitefulness but with an exquisite romanticism. It would only
need the background music to turn it into a beautiful song, with the liric chorus which reads
in inviting the loved one to stay with you at the bottom of a beautiful sea.

Would there be something more precious than the nostalgia that appears in your verses?

With my congratulations, a big and fraternal hug,

Ulpiano

¡Muchas gracias Ulpiano!

Creo que puedo mejorar algunas palabras y como lo expreso pero tu mensaje me anima a seguir.

Un saludo y un fuerte abrazo de vuelta.

 

[silveriddragon]

Bello poema Silver, es conmovedor. Saludos. FELIZ FINDE, DESIRE

:-D Que bueno que te haya gustado. Si he conseguido dejar una impresión me hace sentir que hay algo que puedo seguir practicando,

Saludos

 

[DESIRE SOLE]

Qué bien porque lo vale. FELIZ PREFINDE. DESIRE

 

[DESIRE SOLE]

Creo que tendré que volver antes de lo previsto.
But if not
Qué pasará si dejo a un lado mi palabra, ante mi misma¡?¡?¡?
Quiero saberlo¡?¡¡
Estoy de atar¡?¡?¡¡

 

[silveriddragon]

Creo que tendré que volver antes de lo previsto.
But if not
Qué pasará si dejo a un lado mi palabra, ante mi misma¡?¡?¡?
Quiero saberlo¡?¡¡
Estoy de atar¡?¡?¡¡

Yo también ando dudando, si regresar o no para saludar a alguien a quien aprecio mucho. Regresar significaría lastimar y quien sabe si me reciba de buen agrado XD.

I promised I wouldn't come back but I want to know if that person is ok. Maybe I am crazy XD

 

[DESIRE SOLE]

Yo también ando dudando, si regresar o no para saludar a alguien a quien aprecio mucho. Regresar significaría lastimar y quien sabe si me reciba de buen agrado XD.

I promised I wouldn't come back but I want to know if that person is ok. Maybe I am crazy XD

Lindo detalle y nada como la locura.

 

[Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa]

I think your poem is beautiful, if you ever need any help I'm available, I may not know much, but we can figure it out together,
keep writing and keep dreaming!

Hugs and kisses,