2nd Poem (A phantom love)

[silveriddragon]

Along the way where I walked
you appear like a promise
and when I tried to say something
you wasn't there anymore

In my memories I just wanted someone
, to give everything I felt
but it was an illusion
only a farewell.

Esence of love
that bright in the darkness
is an imaginary point
to guide my soul
and I don't know where.

If not for me
I want to believe
although it evades me
because at the end
I feel the same
peace of mind
a brief awakeness
when I remember
the way you says me
"do we share
the same fantasy?"

A phantom love
eternal silence
is an imaginary point
to guide my soul
and I don't know where.

 

[DESIRE SOLE]

Along the way where I walked
you appear like a promise
and when I tried to say something
you wasn't there anymore
Me fascinó tu poema Silver.
Me recuerda tanto a una amiga que se suicidó sus sueños y mis sueños se concatenaban de una manera que recordarle y leer tu poema, son otro nivel. Saludos Silver, que estés bien y happy
In my memories I just wanted someone
, to give everything I felt
but it was an illusion
only a farewell.

Esence of love
that bright in the darkness
is an imaginary point
to guide my soul
and I don't know where.

If not for me
I want to believe
although it evades me
because at the end
I feel the same
peace of mind
a brief awakeness
when I remember
the way you says me
"do we share
the same fantasy?"

A phantom love
eternal silence
is an imaginary point
to guide my soul
and I don't know where.

 

[silveriddragon]

O_O Me dejaste con cara de "what" amiga poeta... :-O

Quería hacer un poema cercano a lo gótico pero ahora no sé. Gracias

Saludos y excelente semana. Felicidad también para ti :-D