Like a chump

I count to five
but I skip the three
like a chump

Alicante, London, LA
are three
the same vices
homeless singing ballads

the triad
the dead woman who sends a verse
waiting for a backhand
like a chump universe

I know what's up and down
but what is left or right
is pure dilexia

give me three likes

dumber than a chumps
No le comento nada porque no entiendo el inglés... me gusta más cuando publica en español
Pero, bueno, es su gusto... nada que hacer
Saludos y una rosa
 
Solid throughout, minimalist, for the most part. I liked it. Two things (I hate it. I didn't find three :D): "dyslexia", "...than a chump".

Best,

Don Erme

I count to five
but I skip the three
like a chump

Alicante, London, L.A.
are three
the same vices
homeless singing ballads

the triad
the dead woman who sends a verse
waiting for a backhand
like a chump universe

I know what's up and down
but what is left or right
is pure dilexia

give me three likes

dumber than a chumps
 
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