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Roses without thorns

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Maino, Apr 11, 2025. Replies: 4 | Views: 479

  1. Maino

    Maino Poeta recién llegado

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    CANCIÓN




    Words have life

    And so do their preferences

    They idolize those sciences

    That you possess when you unite them

    And the breeze in which you sing them

    That's why they love you

    And your sonnets demand it.

    If only I had those magics

    And the star of light

    That elevates poetry

    To the most beautiful galaxy!

    Where loves dazzle

    Extinguishing our sorrows

    Those roses without thorns

    Those silvas you chain

    Where loves dazzle

    Extinguishing our sorrows

    Those roses without thorns

    Those silvas you chain

    If only I had those magics

    And the star of light

    That elevates poetry

    To the most beautiful galaxy!

    Where loves dazzle

    Extinguishing our sorrows

    Those roses without thorns

    Those silvas you chain



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    Maino, Apr 11, 2025
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  2. Alde

    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    A deep appreciation for the power of words and poetry.
    Yearns for the magical ability to elevate poetry to a celestial level, where love shines brightly and sorrows are diminished.

    I greet you from my humble Havana
     
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    Alde, Apr 13, 2025
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    Maino Poeta recién llegado

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    Muchas gracias Alde por tu comentario.
    Saludos
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    This poem celebrates the living essence of words and their magical power when crafted with love and skill. The longing for that “star of light” that elevates poetry into a dazzling galaxy speaks to the deep desire to transform sorrow into beauty. The repeated imagery of roses without thorns and silvas chained adds a lyrical rhythm that enchants and captivates.
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa, Aug 9, 2025
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    Maino Poeta recién llegado

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    Thank you so much, Guadalupe, for reading and leaving your comment and review of my poem.
    Best regards.
     
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    Maino, Aug 10, 2025

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