Dream about you

Jorge Serra C

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• 12 de Julio de 2010

• #1

Last night in my dreams,
We were sitting on the floor.
The moon was talking about love
and I was thinking in your lips.

I see the colour of your wings,
Which climb me to the sky ,
and show me the shape of a kiss.

You were closed to my hand,
while I was nearest to your soul.

You moved your body like a string,
while I tried to play music in your hips.

Last night in my dreams,
you stole my heart at least,
and suddenly.......I wake up,
besides your soul.

 

Última edición: 18 de Julio de 2010

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cenicienta02

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• 18 de Julio de 2010

• #2

que sueño jejeje un gusto pasar por tus letras

 

Mary C. López

Una mujer de líneas y procesos.

• 18 de Julio de 2010

• #3

Excellent, I enjoyed your lines... Kisses.

 

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D347H

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• 23 de Julio de 2010

• #4

Gorgeous rhythm!!
A placer to read your poem.
Regards, glory and stars for you.

 

Jorge Serra C

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• 26 de Julio de 2010

• #5

Hello d347h, gracias pot tu comentario , me alegra que te hay gustado el poema, best regards too.

 

lluviadeabril

lluvia & rain

• 22 de Agosto de 2010

• #6

Great poem Jorge.



It can be viewed in so many different ways. The ending is simply beautiful.
Company that never leaves, dwells in the deepest parts of dreams and brings you closer from within.

Thanks for sharing,

A hug and a kiss.

 

Jorge Serra C

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• 25 de Agosto de 2010

• #7

Hello gracias por tu comentario lluvia de abril , aunque debi hacerlo un poco mas largo.a kiss

 

CristR

Poeta recién llegado

• 31 de Agosto de 2010

• #8

I have no words, and that is not very often on me...the rhyme is just beautiful and the armony is practicly flawless i like it a lot, lovely poem direct from the heart... congrats jorge!!!

 

Jorge Serra C

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• 31 de Agosto de 2010

• #9

Hello thank you cristr , you are very kind, thank you very much for your words.