Dreamer

silveriddragon · 20 de Diciembre de 2024

Are your dreams or just an illusion?
Living in something that you think is real
But when turn around slowly they are just your creations

Dreamer,
You dont need to wake up
Dreamer,
It is maybe the greatest plan
Dreamer,
It is not a waste
You will be a part of the great design.

Alde · 20 de Diciembre de 2024

silveriddragon dijo:
Are your dreams or just an illusion?
Living in something that you think is real
But when turn around slowly they are just your creations

Dreamer,
You dont need to wake up
Dreamer,
It is maybe the greatest plan
Dreamer,
It is not a waste
You will be a part of the great design.

You can't stop dreaming, that's what life is about.
Merry Christmas.

Greetings

Ermenegildo Tiraboschi · 27 de Diciembre de 2024

The idea that reality is primarily a subjective definition has, philosophically, been around for quite a while, and will probably remain current for as long as humankind exists. The poem is written in a minimalist style, and I found it to be a pretty nice read. But there are a few hiccups here and there that perhaps you might want to consider fixing (see below).

Have a great day!

silveriddragon dijo:
Are your dreams (whatever you think "your dreams" are in here) or just an illusion?
Living in something that you think is real
But when you turn around slowly they are just your creations

Dreamer,
You don't need to wake up
Dreamer,
It is maybe the greatest plan
Dreamer,
It is not a waste
You will be a part of the great design.

Dreamer

silveriddragon

Poeta adicto al portal

Alde

Amante apasionado

Ermenegildo Tiraboschi

Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa