Feel Me

lordtever · 19 de Diciembre de 2007

Could I love you?
Could I feel you?
Would you love me?
Would you feel me?
Would you mend my broken heart?
I know you can
I see it in your eyes,
I feel it in my heart,
You are the one
that will mend my heart
and I am the one
that will fill your need

Arana1006 · 21 de Diciembre de 2007

What delicious confidence that you express in both of you. Asking questions that you already know the answer to. Priceless and so endearing.

carlic4houston · 30 de Diciembre de 2007

I really like this poem, It has a romantic tone and it is a short message from the heart. I will never write a poem in English, I'm not brave enough I think lol.

Carli

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