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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7754 | Views: 255142

  1. Zulma Martínez

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    sol miniatura
    el crepúsculo rojo
    entre los cerros
     
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    Sol miniatura
    reflejado en tu anillo,
    brillo dorado.
     
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    Entre los cerros
    corren los cervatillos,
    sus finas patas.
     
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    Sus finas patas;
    gorrión recién nacido
    nido de plumas
     
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    Nido de plumas
    en el hueco del árbol.
    Sin pajarillos.
     
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    Sin pajarillos;
    paisaje desolado
    sol y sequía
     
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    Sol y sequía,
    sin agua en los pantanos,
    tierra cuarteada.
     
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    Tierra cuarteada;
    en medio del erial
    flor amarilla
     
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    Una flor azul
    junto al borde del río.
    ¿Será geranio?
     
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    ¿Será geranio?
    la flor primaveral
    la brisa tibia
     
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    La brisa tibia
    apenas es caricia
    de mariposa.
     
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    De mariposa
    el brillante disfraz.
    La niña baila.
     
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    La niña baila;
    crepúsculo, estío
    una paloma
     
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    Una paloma
    coja y con ala rota,
    golpe de coche.
     
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    Golpe de coche;
    nidos en primavera
    un gran revuelo
     
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    Un gran revuelo.,
    bandada de palomas
    junto a la, fuente.
     
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    Junto a la fuente
    el pintor con su tela,
    amanece.
     
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    Amanece,
    neblina a ras del suelo,
    no hay ni gorriones.
     
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    No hay ni gorriones;
    cielo gris y relámpagos
    un viento frío
     
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    Un viento frío
    propio de este febrero,
    resguardo al sol.
     
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    Resguardo al sol
    duerme la lagartija
    sobre una piedra
     
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    sobre una piedra
    se levanta un imperio...
    ¡miles de hormigas!
     
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    ¡miles de hormigas!
    sin hojas los rosales
    uy, unos sapos
     
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    ¡uy! unos sapos
    cayeron en la sopa
    ¿ancas de rana?
     
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    ¿ancas de rana?
    entre papas y coles
    manjar extraño
     
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    Manjar extraño,
    los saltamontes fritos,
    patas crujientes.
     
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    patas crujientes
    cervezas y centollas
    sobre la mesa
     
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    Sobe la mesa
    la tarjeta del nieto,
    viaje feliz.
     
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    Viaje feliz;
    autopista florida
    veloces automóviles
     
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    Veloces automóviles
    con rastros de siseos,
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