let me stay

Sometimes just life test us,
to know what we`re made of
and to find out our weirdness
painted in black or mauve.



Sometimes I pick up insanity;
madness full of love,
selfish full of bounty…
what I have above.



Above I have a song
above I have gun…
to fight all the fears,
I become a seers.



If you`re afraid
It`s not me…
take on me
and let me stay.



`Cos you`re the fire,
of my heart, the lighter.

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Lu dijo:

Let me stay where the raindrops as they fall tell our story... Wonderful poem, sweet and well organized, just a beautiful composition, congratulations

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Thanks 4 all you`re wellcome to visit anytime

Hughs

abstrusa dijo:

Polakitooo!!! I love this poem ¿song? because it looks more a song than a poem, anyway it´s beautiful. It´s a pity I can´t hear the song you chose ... I´ve got some problems with mozilla... Congratulations and hugs, Abstrusa.-

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Oh thanks Abstru you`re so nice, i think all my poems always sound like songs, but i think it is because the rhimes, the song i`ve choosen is "i miss you" by Incubus, maybe it is not the best choice but that was exactly what i was listen again and again when i was writing.

anyways, thanks for taking your time and enjoying it.

Hughs.

poroeta dijo:

Nice! I liked the images, the guns and whatnot, liked the meditation and confession of it all, peace.

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Hey poroeta, thanks, that`s such a confession, i made it with one porpouse... to let know someone who is important to me how i am sometimes.

Thanks for passing by

PEACE!