tenderness

Sol Mircovich · 16 de Abril de 2008

,

I try
not to convey
my feelings
with anyone

They don't have
why to carry
with my own grief

But it's impossible
to hide
that I miss
your tenderness

God might be
truly thankful
because
you're there
with Him

Sol Mircovich · 5 de Junio de 2008

Angel de Jesus dijo:
sweet as corn candy made out your own words...
Great and I am very happy to have my eyes travelling your fine poetry...
-angel-

Thanks!
Take care

Sol.

Esme · 5 de Junio de 2008

It's always of great pleasure to read your poems. This one couldn't be as sweet or more wonderful than the others . Love and Kisssessss!!!

Sol Mircovich dijo:
,

I try
not to convey
my feelings
with anyone

They don't have
why to carry
with my own grief

But it's impossible
to hide
that I miss
your tenderness

God might be
truly thankful
because
you're there
with Him

Sol Mircovich · 13 de Agosto de 2008

Esme dijo:
It's always of great pleasure to read your poems. This one couldn't be as sweet or more wonderful than the others . Love and Kisssessss!!!

Thanks for your comment.
You're very sweet.
Take care

Sol.

poroeta · 3 de Septiembre de 2008

Have to say >> your english is a little, a tid bit, a tad broken (but then again..who's perfect?). That said, i have to sayeth :::: that you 'convey' your sadness just as good as if there were no cracks in your layout... best to you.