The ungrateful

Santiago_del_Alba · 20 de Marzo de 2008

He, ungrateful...
ashamed of his own,
taked apart his family,
by a supposely crown.

He, ungrateful...
in love of a stupid love,
being miserable in life
by who?, you never know.

He, ungrateful...
at least grow up,
learned to be a gentleman
but in cost of his own

Sol Mircovich · 25 de Marzo de 2008

I have a doubt... I think that it might be "in love with a stupid love" not of.
Surely, you know more than me and it's right, who knows!
Hugs!

Sol.

Santiago_del_Alba · 26 de Marzo de 2008

Sol Mircovich dijo:
I have a doubt... I think that it might be "in love with a stupid love" not of.
Surely, you know more than me and it's right, who knows!
Hugs!

Sol.

Yes i know, i though of that point too, but the thing im trying to put in that sentence is he is in love of someone, so i think is better to say "in love of a stupid love" so that stupid love is her... because she dont love him and he felt stupid so his heart. But i thank you by your comment, and i think you know too, dont be too humble, people like to take ventage of that.

Estefyy · 5 de Abril de 2008

Santiago_del_Alba dijo:
He, ungrateful...
ashamed of his own,
taked apart his family,
by a supposely crown.

He, ungrateful...
in love of a stupid love,
being miserable in life
by who?, you never know.

He, ungrateful...
at least grow up,
learned to be a gentleman
but in cost of his own

Me gusto muchisimo la simplicidad del poema.algo que lo hace claro y a la vez hermoso.Te super felicito!!!!!

The ungrateful

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