Twilight Magic

[Arana1006]

Whistle, wind, whistle,
show me your beauty fair.
Through the blooming lupines,
breathe in the moist summer air.​

Twinkling fire flies
light up the twilight sky.
Secret lovers wonder,
hear them running by.​

Glowing exotic flowers
throw pollen everywhere.
Sparking golden dust
brings magic to the air.​

Night is fast approaching,
to sleep my giant trees.
Fall to the lullaby
of the gentle breeze.​

 

[hectormaxx]

De seguro te quedo muy bonito pero no se ingles como para dejar comentario.

 

[Alexandro]

Whistle, wind, whistle,
show me your beauty fair.
Through the blooming lupines,
breathe in the moist summer air.​

Twinkling fire flies
light up the twilight sky.
Secret lovers wonder,
hear them running by.​

Glowing exotic flowers
throw pollen everywhere.
Sparking golden dust
brings magic to the air.​

Night is fast approaching,
to sleep my giant trees.
Fall to the lullaby
of the gentle breeze.​

Whistle, Wind, Whistle
Is beautiful, a wonderful poem, which samples a single inspiration, which is beautiful read you, in the distance, even read it every feeling you princess.

Stars for you, all of the universe for you.

ILY

 

[Ricardo R. Ruiz]

Whistle, wind, whistle,
show me your beauty fair.
Through the blooming lupines,
breathe in the moist summer air.​

Twinkling fire flies
light up the twilight sky.
Secret lovers wonder,
hear them running by.​

Glowing exotic flowers
throw pollen everywhere.
Sparking golden dust
brings magic to the air.​

Night is fast approaching,
to sleep my giant trees.
Fall to the lullaby
of the gentle breeze.​

beautiful and natural. for an instant I felt like reading one of Emily Dickinson's poems dedicated to those little things that we dont pay attention to, like the bees, the flowers and the ants...beautiful indeed my friend! RRR

 

[Arana1006]

Lo siento tanto hectormaxx! Que lastima, y no se como traducirlo. Eres tan dulce en dejando un comentario. Gracias.

 

[Arana1006]

Thank you Alex. I am happy you enjoyed it. I feel honored by your comment in english. Its my favorite kind of poem that exhales nature in all its wonder. ILY

 

[Arana1006]

Ricardo! I was so happy to see your comment. Truth be told, I posted this poem with you in mind. Your poems always have such wonderful flow and beauty, they put me to shame for I usually leave the rhyming to one side. But when one writes about nature how can one but write with a flow and elegance that the subject demands and desires. I am so delighted you found it pleasing.

 

[ScoutAngel]

I need to be honest...

That was a great poem!

The greates poem we own is not the one we make with our great skills of writing, it's our life.


Still writing... in Englis, in Portuguese, in Spanish XDDD, a poem is a poem!

 

[Arana1006]

I need to be honest...

That was a great poem!

The greates poem we own is not the one we make with our great skills of writing, it's our life.


Still writing... in Englis, in Portuguese, in Spanish XDDD, a poem is a poem!

Hey ScoutAngel! You're cute, thanks for your comment. Ah, life and poetry. Cant have one without the other. Let me know when you post something in english. Catch you later.

 

[kunapocha]

hi my dear friend ... don't worry about the language i can speak english too ... you can write me in your language if you want ... very nice your poem ... i like the way how you use the beauty of the nature to inspirate your feelings ... congratulations ... go on ... =)

 

[Arana1006]

hi my dear friend ... don't worry about the language i can speak english too ... you can write me in your language if you want ... very nice your poem ... i like the way how you use the beauty of the nature to inspirate your feelings ... congratulations ... go on ... =)

Thanks kunapocha. Nature is a great inspiration. I am glad you enjoyed. Sweet dreams girl.

 

[sunny]

What a beautiful poem, nice work!! the rythming is great and it is very nice

 

[Arana1006]

fall to the lullaby, light up the twilight light, moist summer air...
Precious way for a summertime dreams like the ones I used to envy still near by like superior, long time ago, my dear friend.
Thanks again for the sweet and soft memories...

-angel-

I am pleased that my poem brought back such fond memories for you.
There is nothing like the twilight of the north. That spellbinding blue...

 

[Arana1006]

What a beautiful poem, nice work!! the rythming is great and it is very nice

Thanks sunny. I had fun writing it. Nature, its one of my favorite themes to write about.

 

[Santiago_del_Alba]

Whistle, wind, whistle,
show me your beauty fair.
Through the blooming lupines,
breathe in the moist summer air.​

Twinkling fire flies
light up the twilight sky.
Secret lovers wonder,
hear them running by.​

Glowing exotic flowers
throw pollen everywhere.
Sparking golden dust
brings magic to the air.​

Night is fast approaching,
to sleep my giant trees.
Fall to the lullaby
of the gentle breeze.​

Beautiful, i see the exotic, the magic of this poem, is like an invocation to a world of the unseen, nice words, i like the "Whistel, wind, whistel". I love this poem, lol, Congrats... 5 stars

 

[Enilaina]

Beautiful poem...colorful, sensitive, inspiring... A discret jewelry in the dark. Congratulation!