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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Alma ventura, Jun 1, 2010. Replies: 9 | Views: 786

  1. Alma ventura

    Alma ventura Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Have you been so down,
    feeling so left behind,
    locked inside your room
    while pain makes you blind?

    Have you been so sad
    that tears hide from your face,
    afraid to just see
    that you pray you die?

    Have you felt a big weight
    hanging from your chest,
    do you stare at the ceiling,
    wainting for something safe?

    Please tell me that you have,
    even if you lie,
    so my heart doesnt feel lonely
    in this road of life...
     
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  2. ROSA

    ROSA Invitado

    OjÚ,un abrazo
     
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  3. guillermo santillana marq

    guillermo santillana marq Poeta fiel al portal

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    yes alma..i have been so down many times, i have feel how my prays die.
    but i have got good lessons...keep walking alma!
     
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  4. RA

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    What a sensible poem you've written, Alma! You've put your soul in it, telling your griefs so that your readers may tell you if they have undergone those sensations in some moments. When you feel that way, you're not the unique one. We're with you, offer you our solidarity and solidarity is the best therapy. The life is full of happy moments, little happy moments, and sad moments that also are part of the plurality of life. That challenges our capacity to overcome them. Nobody can say that he/she has never been down. I am certainly you will underfeat sadness. Thanks for sharing your extraordinary poem and to teach us to trust in life.
    Fraternally,
    Ramiro
     
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  5. Alma ventura

    Alma ventura Poeta asiduo al portal

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    I know that Im not the only one that feels so sad sometimes....
    and i decided to share how i feel.
     
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  6. Alma ventura

    Alma ventura Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Ramiro, thanks for your letters, I have been fighting sadness for a long time, but you know?, sadness is mother of nice poems
    sometimes, so its not that bad if we can handle it.
    Kisses.
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    of course I have Alma!, oooooooh, depression sometimes feels so miserable. We feel like we were in the darkness, blind, and with no return to the light......and the death approcaches. But I've learnt that we always have to find the possitive side of the things, because at the end of the tunnel...there's always a bit of light.
    LIGHT YOUR WORLD
    hugs for you, excellent poem girl.
    Pemb Winter
     
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  8. Alma ventura

    Alma ventura Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Thanks Pem, I really appreciate you,
    hugs and kisses for you!!
     
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  9. RA

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    Alma:
    Nothing to add. Nevertheless, I'd say: You're completely right. Sadness is the mother of all the beautiful melancholic poems. Glad you know how to handle it.
    A happy hug,
    Ramiro
     
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  10. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    When sadness prevails, the writing gives way.

    Beautiful poem Alma, I think we've all been there at one point or another. It makes the worth of every thought.

    A huge hug.
     
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