the scent of her hair and the breeze

[Guerrion]

I lack
and I am out of luck,
but I am on the lookout
for an unusual rhyme.

Even if your smile
is your most striking feature,
your hair, in contrast to common hair,
communicates emotions through the wind.

Fridays
are so romantic,
but how do I start a poem?

Oh, Jesus,
If by error I became a poet,
still perform a miracle for me.

Fidel Guerra. Jan 13, 2023.​

 

[Cecilya]

I lack
and I am out of luck,
but I am on the lookout
for an unusual rhyme.

Even if your smile
is your most striking feature,
your hair, in contrast to regular hair,
communicates emotions through the wind.

Fridays
are so romantic,
but how do I start a poem?

Oh, Jesus,
If by error I became a poet,
still, perform a miracle for me.

Fidel Guerra. Jan 13, 2023.​

One of my friends,-he is a poet too-long time ago wrote something like this but in Spanish:
"Your hair is a weapon of mass seduction".
I noticed that men give importance to a woman's hair I guess because as in picture, it is the frame of face, the frame for the eyes.
And of course, scent means identity, style, a woman's trademark.
Your poem is very romantic, my friend, and the last lines can show the heart behind the words.
I like reading you in English.
Have a beautiful weekend.

 

[Guerrion]

Cecy,
según, before there was a poet here,
at the loading dock, someone else would occasionally write
rude things to female workers there—things that wouldn't make them blush
or desire to return. The truth is the scent that women bring to the dock all day long
and their gorgeous and silky brown, black, or blonde hair feed or make my creative engine soar.

It impresses me since there is always a breeze flowing through my place,
their hair, which heightens their beauty, and a menudo me inspiran esta poesía.
I don't know if my romanticism is well-rooted, but for this moment, I'm happy with your compliment.

Un fuerte abrazo y mis saludos desde el norte del pacifico.

Fidel Guerra.