What do you see?

[Elilix]

Now look at me,
what do you see?:
a heaven without a God,
a angel without his wings

A human being
that lost his hope,
a human been
with a broken heart

Only one more
in a long sky,
only a bird more
that can not fly

That's what you see
when you look into my eyes
that's what you see
cause you can see more than that

 

[K@RiTo_pRiNcEsS]

It is beautiful, and your question is dificul but not impossible,
if some person try for one time to realy see.
What do you see?
Bye

 

[Angel Virgilio]

Puedo ver solamente lo que tú hagas real en mí, de ti solo depende.

 

[*Sabrina*]

I see a great poem
I cann't see beyond.
You felt as if you'd just woke up
Regards​

 

[Elilix]

It is beautiful, and your question is dificul but not impossible,
if some person try for one time to realy see.
What do you see?
Bye

depende de con q tanto exfuerzo mire el otro

q veo yo?

mi reflejo

jajaja

una persona con sus virtudes y defectos

 

[Elilix]

Puedo ver solamente lo que tú hagas real en mí, de ti solo depende.

entons todos deberian ver lo bueno de mi
jajaja

claro q tienes razon, mucho depende d lo q uno muestra, pero tmb influye lo q el otro cree ver d vos

gracias x pasar

 

[Elilix]

I see a great poem
I cann't see beyond.
You felt as if you'd just woke up
Regards​

muchas gracias x tus palabras sabrina
mas q despertar, seria ver

 

[AMANT]

Beautiful poem Elilix, It's a shame that he can only see that. He shuld see your precious soul, your tenderness and the way that you love. These are the most important characteristics in a person. Congratulations. God bless you friend. Kisses

 

[Elilix]

Beautiful poem Elilix, It's a shame that he can only see that. He shuld see your precious soul, your tenderness and the way that you love. These are the most important characteristics in a person. Congratulations. God bless you friend. Kisses

Thank you friend

you always saids the most beautiful things about me

God bless you too

 

[comarcr]

Bueno el ingles es un idioma q no me gusta para escribir, me parece q los idiomas de origen latino son mas ricos para eso!!! pero igual me encanta como escribes en cualquier idioma jeje!!! hermoso poema.

 

[Elilix]

Bueno el ingles es un idioma q no me gusta para escribir, me parece q los idiomas de origen latino son mas ricos para eso!!! pero igual me encanta como escribes en cualquier idioma jeje!!! hermoso poema.

jajaja

q loco q sos amigo!

muchas graciassss

t amooo

 

[Bécquer_06]

NO hay idioma existente que evite decir lo que uno siente...
Adieu mon cherí...

 

[Elilix]

Great... That´s a girl...
a great pleasure standing by your ´poetry...
Regards
-angel-

thanks you Angel

my pleasure

 

[E. R. Aristy]

I think the image of yet another crippled bird is the key verse in this reflective poem. I loved the title as well, what do you see? I think your poem invite us to take a flight beyond appearance and contradictions.

 

[Elilix]

NO hay idioma existente que evite decir lo que uno siente...
Adieu mon cherí...

muy cierto Becquer
gracias x las palabras

 

[Gustavo Cervantes]

.. jeje...

what do I see?

I see a byrd, an angel and you..trying to brake free ..
But the wall is to high as you can see..
sad , sort of.. but nice and smooth..

love..

 

[Elilix]

I think the image of yet another crippled bird is the key verse in this reflective poem. I loved the title as well, what do you see? I think your poem invite us to take a flight beyond appearance and contradictions.

no sabia q podia darsele esa interpretacion al poema

q placer

 

[Sol Mircovich]

It might be "an angel".
I like it...

 

[Elilix]

.. jeje...

what do I see?

I see a byrd, an angel and you..trying to brake free ..
But the wall is to high as you can see..
sad , sort of.. but nice and smooth..

love..

thanks yo pecador

beautiful words

 

[Elilix]

It might be "an angel".
I like it...

ohhhhh

thank you Sol

you are so sweet