Double Vision

Stuck with double vision,
Heartache
And the real life,
While standing in front
Of changing doors,
Opening to nothing.​

 

Short words of a long felt.

Have given us your beautiful expression here, where the heart can be seen without glasses. It could burst

Beautiful and profound.

Stars for you arana1006

 

Thank you Alexandro. Sometimes the least amount of words speak the loudest. Not to be heard, but to be felt. Hugs and Kisses dear boy.

 

short poem which invites to read it many times...
I like it..

 

Thank you Sol Mircovich. I enjoy writing short poems. I still can't figure out how to accomplish them in Spanish. Hopefully with improvement of the language I will find the words.

 

Wow, tu síntesis me deja pensando, que escudriñar a través de esa nada, como dijo Milton y a mi gusto, es mejor llamarlo: vacío empty.
Thnx was a really pleasure.

 

I'm gald you liked my little poem KngSuggar. Take care buddy. I dont remember which work of Milton you refer to, but I will look it up. Thanks.

 

Oh sorry you rigth.
Pensaba no en Milton exactamente si no en W Blake donde dice "But in Milton.....And the Holly Ghost (are) vaccum", pero vaccum en la concepcion latina me parece mas cercano al "Empty" y lo relacione al "opening to nothing", pero si tengo alguna referencia mal, no hagas caso, tu poema me gusto. Saludos.

 

Jajaja. Gracias KngSuggar! Cuidate,

 

Ah, but the joy when without expectation a door opens and love is found within. How many doors of darkness do we have to open before we come to that door? Hugs, angel.

 

Sometimes life seems like an unanswered knock on the door, like a prayer never heard, like so many other things that escape reason. Fortunately for us, there is always a new day, with a new beginning... hopefully away fom nothingness and despair. Hope should be the last thing to go. So let's hope for the double vision to disappear into a bright future.
Bless u!

 

Sounds good to me. Such a bright outlook should always be the basis for opening the door. So often we find only what we expect and if we expect despair and nothingness, thats what we get. Thank you so much for your meaningful comment. I truly enjoyed it. Be safe.

 

Me miro doblemente
atrapada
en una visión dolorosa
de la propia vida,
aun estando
frente a la puerta
de la solución,
es
como si me abriera
a
nada.

Hola amiguita, no es una traducción textual ni tampoco Buena, pero eso interpreto. Ojala y llegues a dominar estos poemas cortos en los dos idiomas
Pues sería una bendición para todos nosotros. Abrazos y besos sinceros.

 

Gracias Angel. Thank you for your encouragement
Your translation of my poem is very special to me.
Abrazos y besos para ti amigo.

 

I’m here another time looking for my double vision. Sometime I like to come back and see what’s happen. Kisses little queen.

 

Puertas abriendo una nada... lista para ser iniciada con un "algo".. me gustó tu poema... Besos de música y poesía..

 

Opening to nothing...the monotony of life in general. Very simple, yet profound.

 

You are so sweet. :::hug:::
Stop by any time. I look forward to it.
Hugs and kisses for you.

 

Si un "algo" jajaja. Muy cierto Armonia. Gracias por pasar.
Besos de musica y poesia, una hermosa combinacion. Igualmente.
Saludos!!

 

But isn't life always full of monotony?! Yet we survive.
Thanks for stopping by Notstrong. I am pleased you liked my poem.
Greetings!

 

Nice poem.
Double Vision, that can change us, that can realize us, that con kill us.
It was a pleasure.

Luis.-

 

Thanks Lady Ligeia!

 

So very true, but the changes can be positive, if we work at it...
Nice to see you around.