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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7803 | Views: 262698

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  1. dragon_ecu

    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    dejando heridas
    de mirada alejada
    ¡ay! golondrinas
     
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    dragon_ecu, May 27, 2016
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  2. LUVIAM

    LUVIAM Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Ay golondrinas!
    que embellecen la tarde
    en el ocaso.
     
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    LUVIAM, May 27, 2016
  3. lobo111

    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    en el ocaso
    se siente más latente
    tu despedida
     
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    lobo111, May 27, 2016
  4. Fenix_Poet

    Fenix_Poet Poeta fiel al portal

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    tu despedida,
    augura negras noches
    de desventura
     
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    Fenix_Poet, May 27, 2016
  5. Edith Elvira Colqui Rojas

    Edith Elvira Colqui Rojas Invitado

    De desventura
    llora triste la noche
    y no estás.
     
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    Edith Elvira Colqui Rojas, May 27, 2016
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  6. dragon_ecu

    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    y no, no estás
    la ventana brillante
    te aleja así
     
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    dragon_ecu, May 27, 2016
  7. lobo111

    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    te aleja así
    todos mis sentimientos
    se van contigo
     
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    lobo111, May 28, 2016
  8. LUVIAM

    LUVIAM Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Se van contigo
    las madrugadas frías
    de horas felices
     
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    LUVIAM, May 29, 2016
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  9. lobo111

    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    de horas felices
    estuvieron repletos
    nuestros momentos
     
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    lobo111, May 30, 2016
  10. Fenix_Poet

    Fenix_Poet Poeta fiel al portal

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    nuestros momentos,
    mudaron de recuerdos
    a bellos versos
     
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    Fenix_Poet, May 30, 2016
  11. lobo111

    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    a bellos versos
    yo siempre te remito
    cuando te quiero
     
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    lobo111, May 31, 2016
  12. Fenix_Poet

    Fenix_Poet Poeta fiel al portal

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    cuando te quiero,
    indiscretas miradas
    llegan de luna
     
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    Fenix_Poet, May 31, 2016
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    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    llegan de luna
    sus rayos luminosos
    te hacen hermosa
     
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    lobo111, Jun 2, 2016
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    Nota: Y si de pronto cambiamos el haiku encadenado y pasamos a haikai ¿?
     
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    dragon_ecu, Jun 2, 2016
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    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    encadenados
    van nuestros corazones
    a la pasión
     
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    lobo111, Jun 5, 2016
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    ¡Ah, la pasión!
    El tronco del ciruelo
    aún guarda las marcas
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 6, 2016
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Guarda las marcas
    de tu paso la hierba
    junto a la fuente.
     
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    Maramin, Jun 6, 2016
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    Mar_ Invitado

    Junto a la fuente
    picotean dos aves
    migas de amor
     
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    Mar_, Jun 6, 2016
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    migas de amor
    es lo que niegas mujer
    a mi persona
     
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    lobo111, Jun 7, 2016
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Mi persona
    el vitral que ahora quiebran
    haces de luna
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 7, 2016
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    haces de luna
    danzan alegremente
    sobre tu cuerpo
     
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    Fenix_Poet, Jun 7, 2016
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    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    sobre tu cuerpo
    escribe el mío propio
    versos de amor
     
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    lobo111, Jun 8, 2016
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Versos de amor
    escalera de rosas
    al pie, los lirios
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 8, 2016
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    al pie, los lirios
    en tu cabeza rosas
    y tu hermosura
     
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    lobo111, Jun 8, 2016
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Tú, hermosura
    el viento inclina las flores
    a tu paso
     
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    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    yendo a tu paso
    camino lentamente
    mientras te miro
     
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    lobo111, Jun 9, 2016
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Te miro
    caen hojas de la encina
    cada vez más bella
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 9, 2016
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    cada vez más bella
    de plata viste al bosque
    luna en el cielo
     
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    Fenix_Poet, Jun 9, 2016
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    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    luna en el cielo
    sutil brisa marina
    beso tus labios
     
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    lobo111, Jun 9, 2016
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Beso tus labios
    se llevan el bañador
    las olas del mar
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 10, 2016
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