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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7801 | Views: 262550

  1. Maramin

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    Ser germinada
    bajo la tierra húmeda.
    Ya brota el tallo.
     
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  2. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Ya brota el tallo
    llega la primavera
    el campo verde.
     
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  3. Maramin

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    El campo verde,
    césped recién cortado,
    los futbolistas.
     
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  4. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Los futbolistas
    cuando saltan al césped
    las gradas vibran.
     
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    Las gradas vibran,
    los chiquillos saltando
    de arriba abajo.
     
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  6. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    De arriba abajo
    cae el agua del cielo
    que subió arriba.
     
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    Que subió arriba
    del tejado la gata,
    vuelan gorriones.
     
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  8. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Vuelan gorriones
    pan al sol en la plaza
    duerme un anciano
     
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    Duerme un anciano
    en un banco del parque.
    Lo mira un niño.
     
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  10. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Lo mira un niño
    tren en escaparate
    pequeñas huellas.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Pequeñas huellas
    marcadas con harina,
    un ratoncito.
     
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  12. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Un ratoncito
    provocó la estampida
    olla en el suelo
     
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    Olla en el suelo
    recoge agua de lluvia,
    una gotera.
     
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  14. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Una gotera
    la nevera vacía
    pan compartido
     
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    Pan compartido,
    palomas y gorriones
    se lo reparten.
     
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    Se lo reparten
    al África salvaje
    los Europeos
     
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  17. Azalea

    Azalea Invitado

    Los europeos
    no cuidan a sus aves,
    ni sus reptiles
     
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    Ni sus reptiles
    asustan a los niños,
    caseta hindú.
     
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  19. Azalea

    Azalea Invitado

    [​IMG]
    Caseta hindú
    Los colores de Abril,
    polvos de pétalos
     
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    carmen viviana Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Polvo de pétalos

    renueva sus colores

    la mariposa​
     
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    La mariposa
    mil colores al aire
    del suelo al cielo
     
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    La mariposa
    ignora su belleza.
    ¡Por ella muere!
     
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    Del suelo al cielo
    el cohete espacial,
    visto y no visto.
     
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  24. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Me adelanté:)
     
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    Estábamos escribiendo al mismo tiempo, pero ya respondí al tuyo...;)
     
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    Por ella muere

    el oso en el panal

    comiendo miel​
     
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    Visto y no visto
    el pastel de la abuela
    olor del tiempo
     
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  28. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    Comiendo miel
    los osos buscan larvas
    abejas vuelan
     
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    Abejas vuelan

    en busca de otro árbol

    y de otra reina​
     
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    Y de otra reina

    se forma otro panal

    con cada pupa*
    * (Pupa, bebé de abeja)
     
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