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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262380

  1. Sinedie

    Sinedie Sinediè

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    Hora es del cambio
    siempre en un vahído
    mirando reloj
     
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  2. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Mirando el reloj
    invisibles armadas
    la cuenta atrás
     
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  3. Sinedie

    Sinedie Sinediè

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    La cuenta atrás
    amenaza ataka
    rata fantasma
     
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  4. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Rata fantasma
    con presteza se oculta
    fácil escapa.
     
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  5. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Fácil escapa
    el duelo de un mal hombre
    muerto el amor
     
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  6. José Ignacio Ayuso Diez

    José Ignacio Ayuso Diez Epicuro y la ataraxia, sin miedos ...

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    muerto el amor
    la vida se congela
    largo el olvido
     
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  7. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Largo el olvido
    del amor y el perdón
    corta la senda
     
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  8. Sinedie

    Sinedie Sinediè

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    Corta la senda
    de la rata malparada
    un gato negro
     
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  9. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Un gato negro
    el alféizar refugio
    hogar en ruinas
     
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  10. marya Jesús

    marya Jesús Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hogar en ruinas,
    el mendigo pidiendo
    bajo la lluvia
     
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  11. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Bajo la lluvia
    las lágrimas resbalan
    en calles vacías.
     
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  12. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Me temo que 'en calles vacías' nos suman 6 sílabas. Obviaré el 'en' para seguir la cadena.

    Calles vacías
    la policía multa
    la poesía.
     
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  13. Sinedie

    Sinedie Sinediè

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    La poesía
    una mierdecita marrón
    de mi ratita
     
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  14. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Va tu ratita
    subiendo por el hombro
    bola en omóplato.
     
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  15. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Bola en omóplato.
    Diagnostica el doctor
    la contractura.
     
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  16. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    La contractura,
    dolorosa presencia,
    golpe fallido.
     
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  17. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Golpe fallido;
    el samurái sonríe
    decapitado.
     
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  18. quaqquaq

    quaqquaq Poeta recién llegado

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    Decapitado,
    nuestro aliento de días
    se queda corto.
     
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  19. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Se queda corto
    el Camino al llegarse
    a la Autopista.
     
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  20. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    A la autopista
    la canícula pinta
    cielo en el suelo.
     
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  21. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Cielo en el suelo
    refleja tras la lluvia
    la carretera.
     
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  22. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    La carretera.
    Azabache, añil, verde;
    cruce entre campos.
     
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  23. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Cruce entre campos
    de trigales dorados

    que se menean.
     
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  24. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Que se menean
    los juncos con el viento,
    salta una carpa.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Salta una carpa
    plateada bajo el sol
    de media tarde.
     
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  26. José Ignacio Ayuso Diez

    José Ignacio Ayuso Diez Epicuro y la ataraxia, sin miedos ...

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    De media tarde
    el decrépito Sol
    mata a la musa
     
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  27. Cirhian

    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Mata a la Musa;
    si el Poeta no crea
    no resucita.
     
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  28. Pablo Chinaski

    Pablo Chinaski Invitado

    No resucitan
    Los versos del Parnaso
    Muerte lírica.
     
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  29. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Müerte lírica
    ha sufrido el poeta,
    lapsus mental.
     
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  30. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Lapsus mental
    tienen en sus discursos
    muchos politicos.
     
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