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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262350

  1. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Picor de piel
    en lo alto del pino
    procesionaria
     
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  2. Maramin

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    Supongo que querías referirte a la procesionaria (Oruga que suele atacar a los pinos)
    La palabra que has puesto no existe..
     
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  3. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Si , y no veas la urticaria.
    Maldito corrector.:)
     
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  4. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Procesionarias,
    bajando de los cedros
    todas en fila.
     
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  5. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Todas en fila
    van siempre atareadas
    al hormiguero.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Al hormiguero
    llevan briznas de flores,

    hormigas negras
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Hormigas negras
    destruyen las hileras
    de hormigas rojas.
     
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  8. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    De hormigas rojas
    el orden oriental
    nos arrasará...
     
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  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Nos arrasará
    el terrible tsunami,
    violento mar.
     
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  10. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Violento el mar
    con la ayuda del viento
    gana terreno.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Gana terreno
    sobre el riachuelo seco
    el pedregal.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    El pedregal
    tiene flores silvestres
    natura avanza.
     
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  13. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Natura avanza,
    tras el paso del hombre
    se recompone.
     
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  14. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Se recompone
    el junco de la ráfaga
    viento del norte.
     
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  15. fabiolaselene

    fabiolaselene Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hora vació
    tiempo perdido
    ayer.
     
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    Viento del norte,
    en los troncos de pinos
    los verdes musgos.
     
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  17. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Los verdes musgos
    sobre la roca blanca
    mágica vista.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Mágica vista.
    el sol entre las nubes,
    amanecida.
     
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  19. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    Amanecida
    tu mirada reposa
    entre la mía.
     
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  20. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Entre la mía
    tu manita caliente,
    me reconforta.
     
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  21. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Me reconforta
    un café con anis
    en el invierno.
     
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  22. Maramin

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    En el invierno
    salgo bien abrigado,
    botas con forro.
     
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  23. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Botas con forro
    me forjaron los años
    con zancadillas.
     
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    fabiolaselene Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Con zancadillas
    me tiraron
    el pie rompí
     
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    fabiolaselene Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    el pie me rompí
    por delante
    por detrás
     
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    fabiolaselene Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    por detrás
    lloraba sin cesar
    !cómo dolía¡
     
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    fabiolaselene Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    !cómo dolía¡
    el mundo roto
    por nosotros
     
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    Por nosotros
    la tierra aceleró
    con aquél beso.
     
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    Con aquel beso
    me enamoré
    firmamos, amarnos
     
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    amor firmado
    papeles amarillos
    ... hojas de otoño...
     
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