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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262296

  1. Maramin

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    Crueles mosquitos,
    en noches de verano
    zumban y pican.
     
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    Zumban y pican
    fastidian en la noche,
    ojos abiertos.
     
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    Ojos abiertos
    en plena oscuridad,
    una luciérnaga.
     
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    Una luciérnaga
    en el patio trasero
    entre geranios.
     
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  5. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Entre geranios
    los patios cordobeses
    en primavera.
     
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    En primavera
    florecillas silvestres
    cubren los prados.
     
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    Cubren los prados
    escarchas mañaneras,
    ligera niebla.
     
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    Ligera niebla,
    en la playa desierta
    una gaviota
     
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    Una gaviota
    sobre la terraza,
    roba comida.
     
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    Roba comida
    un muchacho indigente
    junto a su perro.
     
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    Junto a su perro
    despacito la anciana,
    el can atento.
     
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    El can atento,
    el felino trepado
    en el tejado.

     
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    En el tejado
    los musgos y gorriones,
    tejas partidas.
     
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    Tejas partidas.
    Envejece la casa
    junto a su dueño.
     
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    Junto a su dueño
    confiado dormita
    el perro viejo.
     
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    El perro viejo
    bajo florido ceibo.
    El tordo canta.
     
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    El tordo canta
    llamando a la bandada,
    higos maduros.
     
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    Higos maduros
    entre la higuera verde
    duerme un anciano.
     
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    Duerme un anciano
    en el banco del parque,
    la esposa lee.
     
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    La esposa lee
    cartas tristes de amor
    cárcel franquista
     
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    Cárcel franquista,
    los muros son testigos
    Años oscuros.
     
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    Años oscuros
    anuncio de un final.
    Bola de fuego.
     
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    Bola de fuego
    en azul firmamento
    dora los días.
     
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    Dora los días
    reverbero solar,
    las transparencias.
     
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    Las transparencias
    revelan sentimientos
    que esconde el alma
     
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    Esconde el alma
    dolores e incertezas,
    muestra sonrisas.
     
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    Muestra sonrisas
    aunque por dentro llora
    el comediante .
     
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    El comediante
    se muerde el corazón,
    es buen actor.
     
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    es buen actor
    aunque está dolido
    roba la risa
     
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    Roba la risa
    la tristeza en los ojos,
    fluye una lágrima.
     
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