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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262280

  1. LUVIAM

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    Brillo de piedras
    en la aurora boreal
    en el camino
     
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    En el camino
    algunas plumas sueltas,
    rastros de sangre.
     
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    Rastros de sangre
    junto al tronco caído;
    perdiz y el nido.​
     
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    Perdiz y el nido
    resguardados del viento
    relampaguea
     
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    Relampaguea
    la nube en la montaña;
    croar de ranas.​
     
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    Croar de ranas
    la luna en el estanque,
    huele a jazmín.
     
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    Perdiz y el nido
    vacío ya ha volado
    el perdigón.
     
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    Huele a jazmín
    bajo el árbol del patio
    alfombra blanca
     
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    Rompiste la cadena, amiga Luviam, pero te sigo:

    Alfombra blanca
    sobre los prados verdes.
    la gran nevada.
     
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    Viendo las fechas, estimado Maramín, yo diría que Luviam ha seguido la cadena.


    La gran nevada;
    brillantes en la estepa
    gotas de Sol.
     
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    Pues es cierto, el que se equivocó fui yo que seguí al tuyo sin ver que ya habían respondido, ahora lo veo.

    Gotas de sol
    reflejan con rocío
    las margaritas.
     
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    No hay problemas amigos , lo importante es continuar. Sus haikus me inspiran.

    Las margaritas
    al compás de la lluvia
    se tambalean
     
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    Se tambalean
    en la rama del olmo,
    tórtola y tordo.
     
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    Tórtola y tordo
    picotean el pasto
    de la pradera.
     
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    De la pradera
    las flores amarillas,
    entre amapolas.
     
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    Entre amapolas
    sobresale una espiga
    de trigo gualdo
     
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    De trigo gualdo
    los campos están llenos.
    Sol tras las nubes.
     
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    De trigo gualdo
    va llena la carreta,
    hacia el molino.
     
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    Hacia el molino
    mientras va amaneciendo
    va el molinero
     
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    Va el molinero
    con sombrero de paja,
    mandil y botas.
     
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    Mandil y botas
    en la puerta quedaron
    cae la nieve
     
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    Cae la nieve,
    suave y silenciosa,
    blanco amanecer.
     
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    Blanco amanecer;
    tapa el Sol la paloma
    en mi balcón.​
     
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    En mi balcón
    hay trampas para insectos,
    las telarañas.
     
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    Las telarañas
    lucen las diamantinas
    gotas de rocío.
     
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    Gotas de rocío
    sobre las hojas secas,
    amanecida.
     
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    Amanecida
    la montaña de blanco
    niños y esquíes
     
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    Niños y esquíes,
    en el aire flotan risas,

    el sol brillando.
     
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    El Sol brillando,
    los cantos de cigarra;
    adormecido.​
     
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    Adormecido
    el niño esta en los brazos,
    flota una nana.
     
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