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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262266

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    Viento pampero,
    oleaje de hierbas
    en la planicie.
     
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    En la planicie
    pasturas escarchadas,
    despunta el sol.
     
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    Despunta el sol,
    los trinos de la alondra
    desde lo alto.
     
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    Desde lo alto
    el gavilán observa
    al estornino.
     
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    Al estornino
    le falta orientación,
    bandada lejos.
     
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    Bandada lejos
    entre los arreboles
    crepusculares.
     
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    Crepusculares
    colores en las nubes,
    sombras en tierra.
     
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    Sombras en tierra,
    las blancas nubes cúmulos
    avanzan lento.
     
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    Avanzan lento
    camellos en desierto,
    la caravana.
     
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    La caravana
    cruza el vasto desierto,
    pastores nómadas.
     
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    Pastores nómadas
    con sus perros, al sur
    llevan los renos.
     
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    Llevan los renos
    en busca de alimento
    hacia la tundra.
     
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    Hacia la tundra
    viajan los osos blancos,
    vigila un búho.
     
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    Vigila un búho
    desde un alto castaño,
    La luna asoma.
     
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    La luna asoma
    a medias medio cuerno
    tras una nube.
     
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    Tras una nube
    vuela un viejo aguilucho.
    Sol al poniente.
     
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    Sol al poniente,
    ya se alargan las sombras
    de altos cipreses.
     
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    De altos cipreses
    la finca rodeada.
    Suave nevisca.
     
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    Suave nevisca,
    apenas en el suelo
    húmeda huella.
     
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    Húmeda huella
    en el patio trasero,
    restos de nuez.
     
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    Restos de nuez,
    la cosecha de ardillas
    en su despensa.
     
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    En su despensa
    visita inesperada,
    ratón monstruoso.
     
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    Ratón monstruoso
    parecía la sombra
    de aquel sombrero.
     
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    De aquel sombrero
    no quedó ni la pluma.
    Lo lleva el viento.
     
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    Lo lleva el viento
    junto con el paraguas,
    el aguanieve.
     
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    El aguanieve,
    en las vacías calles
    aroma a leños.
     
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    Aroma a leños,
    troncos recién partidos
    en chimenea.
     
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    En chimenea
    las llamas bailotean
    mientras te beso.
     
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    Mientras te beso,
    en tus ojos brillantes
    un pestañeo.
     
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    Un pestañeo
    imperceptible, suave,
    fue tu señal.
     
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