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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262103

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    Sueños dormidos
    despiertan en la flor
    cuando amanece
     
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    Cuando amanece
    reflejos irisados
    sobre la escarcha.
     
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    Sobre la escarcha
    resaltan del guindillo
    las ocres hojas.
     
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    Las ocres hojas
    del castaño de indias
    sobre la acera.
     
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    Sobre la acera
    El sol del mediodía
    seca la lluvia
     
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    Seca la lluvia
    caída por la noche
    viento del sur.
     
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    Viento del sur.
    Humean los rastrojos
    entre los huertos.
     
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    Entre los huertos
    un camino empedrado
    salta un conejo
     
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    Salta un conejo
    del campo de lechugas,
    oyó un ladrido.
     
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    Oyó un ladrido
    y refugió su cría
    bajo sus patas
     
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  11. Maramin

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    Bajo sus patas
    solo hierba escarchada,
    hunde el hocico.
     
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    hunde el hocico
    en el cuerpo tendido
    nieve manchada...
     
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    Nieve manchada
    huellas de pies y fango
    Suena el portón
     
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    Suena el portón,
    se recoge el ganado,
    anochecida.
     
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    Anochecida
    sin la luz de la luna
    se ve la sierra
     
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    Se ve la sierra
    tras la niebla estival,
    un gran incendio.
     
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    Un gran incendio
    la floresta rojiza
    arde el trigal
     
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    Arde el trigal,
    las espigas maduras
    solo cenizas.
     
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    Solo cenizas
    Dos copas en el suelo
    la chimenea
     
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    La chimenea
    con leños encendidos,
    calor de hogar.
     
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    Calor de hogar,
    en su nido el hornero.
    Labor cumplida.
     
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    Labor cumplida
    el agua de la lluvia
    canalizada.
     
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    Canalizada
    El agua del riachuelo
    hacia la gángora
     
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    Hacia la góngora
    se acerca la babosa,
    puente de sal...
     
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    Puente de sal
    una barca vacía
    la mar serena
     
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    La mar serena,
    baldecitos y palas.
    Blancos castillos.
     
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    Blancos castillos
    esculpen en la nieve
    algunos niños.
     
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    Algunos niños
    trepados al ombú
    Tórrido verano.
     
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    Tórrido verano
    en el barro reseco
    solo las grietas.
     
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    Solo las grietas
    sobre el suelo reseco
    la cucaracha
     
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