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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 261903

  1. LUVIAM

    LUVIAM Poeta veterano en el portal

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    La falta de agua
    reseca la sabana
    jadea un perro
     
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  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Jadea un perro
    tras la larga carrera,
    busca a su dueño.
     
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    GALA GROSSO Poeta adicto al portal

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    Noche sin dueño
    una estrella fugaz.
    Velan a un niño
     
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  4. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Velan un niño
    hasta la madrugada,
    cede la fiebre.
     
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  5. Pi-Radianes

    Pi-Radianes Miembro del jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Como la fiebre
    resplandores del sol
    mar de verano
     
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  6. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Mar de verano,
    temperaturas extremas,
    medusas grandes.
     
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  7. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Medusas grandes
    tentáculos del tiempo
    salitre y sangre.
     
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    Salitre y sangre,
    rastros entre los dientes
    del tiburón.
     
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  9. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Del tiburón
    la aleta crea alerta
    era un delfín.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Era un delfín
    empujando la balsa
    hacia la orilla.
     
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  11. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Hacia la orilla
    otro lado del río
    ojos acechan.
     
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  12. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Sed y esperanza
    llevan en pensamiento
    los inmigrantes.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Los inmigrantes
    anhelan un futuro
    la tierra queda.
     
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    Fenix_Poet Poeta fiel al portal

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    la tierra queda,
    en la dulce memoria,
    del que se marcha
     
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    Del que se marcha
    borraran los recuerdos
    olas y nieblas.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Del que se marcha
    a lejanos lugares
    queda el recuerdo
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Olas y nieblas
    se abaten y recubren
    acantilados.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Queda el recuerdo
    de la fría invernal noche
    rojo y naranja
     
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    Rojo y naranja
    las plumas del canario.
    Trinos al sol.
     
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    Fenix_Poet Poeta fiel al portal

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    Trinos al sol,
    corolas multicolor,
    bella es la vida
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Bella es la vida
    de quien nada precisa
    en su locura.
     
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    En su locura
    recitando poesías
    se pasa el tiempo
     
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    Pi-Radianes Miembro del jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Se pasa el tiempo
    estremecen de gozo
    las manecillas
     
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    Las castañuelas
    entre fandango y palmas
    bata de cola.
     
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    Las manecillas
    en su eterno camino
    condena lenta.
     
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    Pi-Radianes Miembro del jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Condena lenta
    se evade la razón
    la libertad
     
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    La libertad,
    la alondra nos la canta
    de madrugada.
     
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    De madrugada
    huele a café y anís
    en tu ventana
     
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    Pi-Radianes Miembro del jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    En tu ventana
    anidan las palomas
    es primavera
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Es primavera
    los pétalos húmedos
    por el rocío
     
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