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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7799 | Views: 261178

  1. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Maullidos cálidos
    Inexorable instinto
    se arriesga todo.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Maullidos cálidos
    cuando llego mi gata
    me ronronea
     
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    Perdón corte la secuencia y comente...
    originalmente el verso final era:
    gemidos cálidos...
    Pero por rozar el erotismo lo cambié a maullidos. Jajaja... perdón la risa.
    Ya serio retomo la secuencia....

    Maullidos cálidos
    cuando llego mi gata
    me ronronea

    Me ronronea
    cuando al sentarse cerca
    muerdo su cuello
     
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  4. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Muerdo su cuello
    cual ávido vampiro
    la noche oscura
     
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    la noche oscura
    rodeada por cocuyos
    a la distancia
     
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    LUVIAM Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Maullidos cálidos
    observa bajo un árbol
    el labrador
     
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    el labrador
    aúlla a la luna
    mientras espera
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Mientras espera
    los segundos se hacen
    inacabables.
     
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    Inacabables
    gotas frías de lluvia
    sobre mi rostro.
     
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  10. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Sobre mi rostro
    las arrugas del tiempo
    olas en mi alma.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Olas en mi alma
    que me traen y me llevan
    noches y días.
     
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    Noches y días,
    sucesión en cadena
    detrás del tiempo.
     
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    Detrás del tiempo
    tu mirada, tus besos
    aún te espero.
     
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    aún te espero
    hay hojas amarillas
    bajo el almendro
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Bajo el almendro
    nos dimos aquel beso
    dos fuimos uno.
     
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    Dos fuimos uno,
    con el beso y abrazo
    brasas ardieron.
     
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    Brasas ardieron
    en la noche de San Juan
    fiesta en la arena
     
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    Fiesta en la arena
    el brillo de tus ojos

    tras la fogata.
     
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    Tras la fogata
    negra noche amenaza
    salvaje selva
     
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    Salvaje selva
    un siseo cercano
    bajo las ramas.
     
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    Bajo las ramas,
    aprovechando sombras
    ellas zurean.
     
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    Ellas zurean
    en viejo campanario;
    alba otoñal.
     
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    Alba otoñal
    barrida por el viento
    azul y ocre.
     
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    Azul y ocre
    tus párpados derraman
    días y noches.
     
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    Días y noches
    espero tu llamada
    en mis adentros.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    En mis adentros
    florece un nuevo día
    cuanta belleza
     
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    Cuanta belleza
    florido el camposanto
    en primavera.
     
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    En primavera
    los pequeños retoños
    visten las ramas.
     
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    Visten las ramas
    las perlas del rocío
    al sol del alba.
     
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    Al sol del alba
    se corren las cortinas
    un nuevo día.
     
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