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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7794 | Views: 260745

  1. marlene2m

    marlene2m Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Esas magnolias
    bañadas de rocío.
    Brilla la aurora.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Brilla la aurora
    en el profundo valle,
    trino de aves.
     
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    Esas magnolias
    los floridos rosales;
    tres mariposas
     
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    Tres mariposas
    sobre claveles rojos
    en la terraza.
     
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    en la terraza
    la taza del café
    espera fría
     
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    Espera fría
    reflejada en el lago
    la luna llena.

     
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    la luna llena
    que ambos compartimos
    ¿la ves hermosa?
     
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    ¿La ves hermosa?
    la telaraña brilla
    en el portal
     
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    En el portal
    encuentro de vecinos,
    ¡Los buenos días!
     
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    ¡Los buenos días!
    mañana otoñal
    pan y café
     
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    Pan y cafe
    en mañana otoñal,
    canta el canario.
     
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    Canta el canario;
    un gato lo observa
    ¡ay, qué peligro!
     
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    ¡Ay, qué peligro!
    Bajo la tormenta
    niños jugando.
     
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    Niños jugando
    entre los girasoles
    muchas abejas
     
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    Muchas abejas
    zumban en el jardín,
    dalias en flor.
     
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    Dalias en flor,
    brillantes alegrías,
    vivos colores.
     
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    Vivos colores;
    sombrillas en la playa
    un caracol
     
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    Un caracol
    debajo del helecho.
    matinal sombra.
     
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    Matinal sombra
    ante el rigor del sol,
    larga alameda.
     
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    Larga alameda;
    la luna y las estrellas
    ¡cuántos mosquitos!
     
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    ¡Cuántos mosquitos!
    Una nube vibrante
    sobre la charca.
     
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    Sobre la charca
    aparecen burbujas
    ¿será la lluvia?
     
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    ¿Será la lluvia?
    En la cara mojada
    corren las lágrimas.
     
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    corren las lágrimas
    al fundirse los brazos
    cae el quepí
     
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    Cae el quepí,
    rodando por la acera,
    racha de viento.
     
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    Racha de viento;
    las hojas secas vuelan
    ¡qué día frío!
     
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    ¡Qué día frío!
    Pareja con bufanda
    aprieta el paso.
     
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    Aprieta el paso
    en la noche invernal
    un caminante
     
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    Un caminante
    por estrecho sendero,
    ramas al borde.
     
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    Ramas al borde
    del antiguo camino,
    últimos copos.
     
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