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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7794 | Views: 260712

  1. MASTER LY 22

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    Llegan los tordos
    a nidos de calandrias,
    dejan sus huevos.
     
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    Dejan sus huevos
    en los nidos ajenos
    córvidos cucos.
     
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  3. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Córvidos cucos
    viento de primavera
    ¡oh, la tormenta!
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    ¡Oh la tormenta!

    Corolas de manzano

    por todo el huerto.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Por todo el huerto
    las malas hierba crecen.
    Nadie lo cuida.
     
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  6. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Nadie lo cuida;
    lago de aguas turbias
    ni un pececito
     
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    Ni un pececito
    en la negra laguna,
    ni planta alguna.
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    Ni planta alguna

    en los muros del pueblo

    bajo el pantano.
     
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    Bajo el pantano
    se reflejan tejados,
    se ve una torre.
     
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    Se ve una torre
    detrás del caserón,
    parece lúgubre.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Parece lúgubre
    el lago con la niebla,
    canto del búho.
     
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  12. Zulma Martínez

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    Canto del búho
    en el tibio crepúsculo;
    pinar rojizo
     
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    Pinar rojizo
    en clara amanecida,
    vuela un cuclillo.
     
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    Vuela un cuclillo.

    Frente al reloj la niña,

    casi las doce.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Casi las doce,
    la luz del mediodía
    en las campanas.
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    En las campanas

    el toque de difuntos.

    Invierno crudo.
     
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    Invierno crudo,
    los muñecos de nieve,
    ríen los niños.
     
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    Ríen los niños,

    los cerezos en flor

    ya nada importan.
     
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    Ya nada importan
    las pisadas perdidas,
    barren las olas.
     
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    Barren las olas
    la sonbrilla olvidada
    por los jóvenes.
     
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    ¡Por los jóvenes!

    ¿y después?, ¡da lo mismo!

    fiesta del sake.
     
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    Fiesta del sake,
    la escudilla gotea,
    se bebe un sorbo.
     
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    Se bebe un sorbo
    de la rara bebida
    el extranjero
     
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    El extranjero
    con raras pretensiones,
    sandalias negras.
     
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    Sandalias negras,

    por la nieve Maiko,

    ¡Cuánto ha crecido!​
     
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    ¡Cuánto ha crecido
    la hierba entre raíles!
    No pasan trenes.
     
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    No pasan trenes.

    un zarzal con sus flores

    cruza la vía,​
     
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    Cruza la vía
    una cría de corzo,
    sigue su madre.
     
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    Sigue su madre

    con el jersey de lana,

    primeros fríos.​
     
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    Primeros fríos
    en tardes otoñales.
    Luna entre nubes.
     
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