How It Burns The Ice

This is actually a song me and my classmates made a weeks ago for a school work, maybe when the song is finished I could record it with music and upload it...

How it burns the Ice
I
When I think of when I was child
I feel like was able to believe in life, again.
Now where once existed brightness
there is only poor... shine of tears.

In the middle of a crying whisper
I stop and wonder about
how much longer
this will last

Since the gloomy day I broke my window
I have felt how it burns the ice...

chorus:
Under the wind
I'm trying to hide of
This sadness that
never lets me go
My spirit screams it's tired of keep trying to exist
Holding on the lament of a forever-being.

II
Every day that passes in my life
It gets even harder to wake up ans smile
My weak mind can't keep in silence
the big yearning of
end with all

But at least when your around is dark
you can't realize
how alone
you realy are

If I only could remake the past, I
Oh, I would wish just to bring you back
(Solo)
(Chorus)

III
My dirty memory is sick of black
I'm an expert in telling lies
to myself
troubled mind is always greatest
enemy of an in...minent corpse

I am rocked by a million thoughs
carrying lost dreams to this
freezing cold grave
that's my soul

I can't even name it, fear of future!
Empty shadow at the edge of void...

(final)
Gostly winds throgh the broken glass
touches my blue skind
is draining all the light.

There are some grammar mistakes but we don't care, it sounds good
This is special because I made this with my best friends. ​