If Only I could..

..If only I could..


If only I could write in the sky what I feel for you…
If only I could breath the air that surrounds you…
If only I could fly with my broken wings...
If only I could survive and live without you by my side.

Sweet are the dreams at night when I imagine you next
To my side. Bitter sour is the taste in my mouth when
I awake in the morning, only to see the reality of my agonizing truth.

To see that I don’t have you by my side.
To see how your name has disappeared from the sky...
To see how you came only to steal my breath...
To see how you destroyed me, and the dreams...
That one day made me fly...
To see how much I love you and all you've done
Is tear my heart apart.

Dedicated to a
broken heart....
​

 

Que ese corazon Esme no se quiebre se que tus sueños son dulces cuando te imaginas tenerlo a el contigo si solo pudieras hacer tantas cosas si pudieras escribir en el cielo lo que tu sientes por el seria maravilloso es hermoso tu poema y que bueno que pude entederlo del todo te quedo profundo y trste besos linda un placer leerte.

 

Wonderfull poem poet friend, beautifull, your verses are sad but maybe another love is going to cure your hurt heart..

Kisses for you..
A pleasure visit you

 

The pain of the absence is even worst when there has been deceiving.
My stars for your poem, hugs and kisses.
P.S.: Sorry for my English I hope I did not make to many mistakes.

 

Gracias hermoso por tus palabras que siempre son tan alentadoras.. Y si Luneta seria maravilloso poder escribir las cosas que uno siente en el cielo.. . Un placer recibirte. Besitosss!!!:::hug:::​

 

Muchas gracias amiga por tu comentario. Un placer para mi tenerte entre mis letras. Besitosss!!​

 

Well first of all let me thank you for your time and your presence in my little corner, my pleasure. Hugss and kisses for you aswell!!:::hug::: ​

 

This poem totally hugs my heart...
that is really the equivalent of how this poem
makes me feel.
​

 

I really like that way You wrote this poem, well done , greetings from the south Jess

 

Thank you so much for your thoughts and coment. I'm glad you liked it. Here i leave you more of those wonderful hugsssss!!!! :::hug::: ​

 

Hello first of all let me thank you for your time and thoughts regarding my poem. Its my pleasure to have you presence here in my corner. Hugss and kissesss!:::hug:::​

 

I enjoyed your poem. Even sadness is able to generate beauty, we just have to manage it the right way. Thanks for sharing. Regards,

DEJAVU

 

Thank you for your comment and thoughts about my poem. My pleasure receiving you in this my little corner. Hugss and kissesss!​

 

A wonderfull poem, it touch my heart, that part of the broken wings made me tremble and cry. My stars for you, also my love.

 

Gracias por tu comentario un placer como siempre amigo. Besitosss cuidate!:::hug:::​

 

Dreams...

Dreams are dreams just that...
But we can make them real, just dreaming...

It's plesaure read you

Kisses

Eugenio

 

Thank you for your time, alot of truth in what you say
dreams are just dreams... but without them we wouldn't
survive. my pleasure to see you here in this my corner. Kissess and hugs. :::hug:::

 

Very nice although it feels some what sad...
Poems from the heart...



love..

 

Thank you for your time and comment my plesure to have your presence here in my small corner. hugs and kissesss!

 

If only that man could love you, you would be so happy, and your sweet dreams could ever come true. Great poem, my dear friend, it is a pleasure to read your sad poem. Hope you find another great love, you deserve to be love.
my stars and hughs.
(Si tan solo ese hombre te amara, serías tan feliz, y tus dulces sueños se harían siempre realidad. Gran poema, mi querida amiga, es un placer leer tu triste poema. Deseo que encuentres otro gran amor, mereces ser amada.
mis estrellas y abrazos)

 

Amiga muchas gracias por tus buenos deseos! y si talvez algun dia llegara otro
amor y creeme lo voy a estar esperando con brasos abiertos. besitosss cuidate bella. :0 :::hug:::

 

Such a beautiful verses, I loved to read them.
All my stars, the brightest, and a kiss for you,:::hug:::

 

Hola bella cuanto gusto mirarle por aqui en mi pequeno espacio muchas gracias por tu tiempo y comentario. Un gran placer para mi amiga. Besossss y abrasos. :::hug:::

 

Desalentador sin duda elcontenido, pero aún así crear algo así ayuda a olvidar.El final es excelente.Un placer pasar por aqui Esme.

 

Muchisimas gracias por tu comentario amigo. Un placer para mi mirarte por mis letras. Besitossss!!! :::hug:::

 

Is sweet alright, and yet sad, like finding out your true love... never was. a pleasure reading.

 

Thank you for your time. It's a
pleasure recieving you. Kisses.:::hug:::

 

Así que también escribes en inglés, Esme. La verdad, ni sabía que aquí se pudiera escribir en otro idioma que no fuera el español. "Escribir en el cielo lo que siento por ti", "ver cómo tu nombre ha desaparecido del cielo"... Te quedaron muy bien esas metáforas. Disfruté mucho de tu poema, en el que destaca esa anáfora del título: "Si sólo pudiera...".

Espero que ya se hayan curado tus alas rotas y que puedas volar con ellas, y que ese corazón roto al que dedicas el poema no te rompa el corazón.

Besos y estrellas, amiga.

 

Faetón,

Gracias por pasar y leer mis letras.
Me da gusto que disfrutes de mis escritos
los tuyos tambien son de un contenido unico y al
igual me encantan. Por suerte mis heridas an sanado,
ahora vuelo por estos mimos cielos pero con mas fuersas. Ahora vuelo con la
experencia que el dolor algun dia me dejo.
Un beso sincero de mi corazon.

Esme:::hug::::::hug:::

 

I only I could have you everyday and every hour by my side. Well, maybe nothing in this world is impossible. I hope your wishes to become a truth. Your writting is completely emotional. I like this poem.

A pleasure coming here!

Ciao! :::hug:::