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My Father.

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Carlos Aristy, 27 de Febrero de 2008. Respuestas: 8 | Visitas: 5952

  1. Carlos Aristy

    Carlos Aristy Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    By Karla Aristy


    He’s silent
    As he sits on stage
    Listening to all the comments
    And smart remarks
    Of how the people on stage
    Are not doing their job
    He’s nods
    As he seconds the motion
    To pass Passages 9.1 to 9.9
    He smiles
    As he shakes the hands of the graduates
    Or when he sees a good chess move
    He frowns
    As he hears the insults
    And the lack of support
    We get everyday
    For what he does
    He smirks
    To me from the stage
    As I read his mind
    And the sarcastic remarks he’s thinking
    He holds himself together
    As he walks up the stage
    For the last time
    As he’s given a plaque as a Thank You
    Thank You for almost 10 years
    Serving yourself to these children
    Choking up a bit as he is hugged by many
    A flashback of years ago comes back
    From the time the first graders sang to him
    A song they had made and dedicated to him
    As I sit there in the audience
    Hearing the song entitled “To Mr. Aristy”
    He’s silent
    In his office
    Every day of his life
    I look through the opening of the door
    For a sign
    Any sign
    Of pain he feels
    Any pain from the loss we have received
    From working so hard for almost ten years
    To have it taken from under your feet
    I look at his facial expressions
    As he searches for his stamps
    To find a clue,
    Any clue
    If he feels what I feel
    And if he knows that I do.


    My daughter Karla wrote this poem to me, she is 15 years old.
     
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    I´m sure that you are very proud of her!! Congratulations for both of you!
    It´s a very nice and sensitive poem
    Little Richard (Ricardín)

    So..., are you sure that she´s realy your daughter, Carlos? (JeJe)
     
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    RINOA EXPULSADA

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    Ow I'm just another daughter so you see how daughters love dads. They're the protectors, sometimes the idols, the angels and the serious ones who you don't want to get in trouble.
    But they're just adorable:). And, Karla's got this special sense! She looks at your face, "your facial expressions" and she looks the silence, the silent man and she maybe thinks of what's in the inside of her dad. I only can agree with her, sometimes only wives, or sons, or daughters, or children, realize about what's happening.
    Don't worry about the loss, you can win again. And with Karla I wish you will. =)
    My kisses to her, she doesn't seem to start as a poet, congratulations Karla! (you look after your dad) and a hug to the careful and amazing dad you are:::hug:::
    RINOA:::lengua1:::
     
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    Carlos Aristy Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Yes, Ricardin, I am very proud of her and her multiple accomplishments at her young age! Thank you, I just wanted to share her poem about me....
     
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    Carlos Aristy Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Rinoa dearest,

    We already had this conversation in private. I expressed your thoughts to Karla already. Thank you, once again, for your candor. Besos.
     
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    I do not know what kind of person Karla is, but if I know anything about 15 year olds, I would say she was very brave in giving you this poem. That you felt the need to share it with is us is very endearing. Does she write in spanish? I hope you encourage her to do so. A big Hello from the Sunshine State.[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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    Carlos Aristy Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you for your beautiful comment. She is very special, not only for me!
    As for the language, we still struggle with it, but we are working on it.
    Save me some sunshine!
     
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    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    Woow! I suppose you're very proud of her! It's a trully nice poem. I like it.
    Hugs!

    Sol.
     
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    Carlos Aristy Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you Sol. Yes, I am very proud of her! Kiss.
     
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