Stages of a coffee

Sofía Desiré dijo:

Hola Danie,

Qué composición tan hermosa, Danie. Un encuentro cálido, íntimo, y a la misma vez de un light tinte urbano. Me cae como un trozo de pan caliente en la esquina de mi coffee shop en medio de este frio que azota mi ciudad. Yo le pongo música francesa de fondo y un jardín, con tu permiso, claro. Muy bien logrado el inglés, a mi entender. No obstante, para que fluya un tantito su mensaje, me atreví a editar algunas palabras. Te lo pego abajo, si te parece, lo tomas, sino, pues no pasa nada.



A murmur of uninhabitable light pervades
through the bar window

*

*
we said goodbye
in an incessant dialogue of words
attached to the root of silence

*

today is one of those days
in which the city speaks to us
but we only hear what gets lost…



Encantada de leerte.
Abrazo grande.

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danie dijo:

we drink coffee
in a cloudy way
as if we were drinking out our own gaze

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homo-adictus dijo:

Great, but i like spanish, fuck gringos now and ever jjj. Like.

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danie dijo:

A murmur of uninhabitable light pervades
through the bar window

*
we drink coffee in a cloudy way
as if we were drinking out our own gaze
but only in the memory

*
we said goodbye
in an incessant dialogue of words
attached to the root of silence

*

today is one of those days
in which the city speaks to us
but we only hear what gets lost…

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Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa dijo:

I like that side look on your avatar I chose to be a fish this time around...we will see what I come up with next, always trying to reinvent myself.

XOXOXOXOX

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