The Trivial Meaning Of A Hug

A tonic of life itself
Pulchritude that hides in a melange of styles
Epicene figure
Delivering its reason with a quiet vigor
Passing on a thousand words in a trice
Designating momentum
A first
A last
The comeback
The good-bye
Laconic vagabond waiting to be called
The basic liaison of human kind
Accompanied with every feeling
A rustic way
Learned before we can stand on our own
And given the chance
The last one before the trip of a soul
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Duuuuude! This is awesome! Your vocabulary is excellent, you've outdone yourself. I won't pick a favorite line because it's impossible to choose.
jaguey

 

Thx JAG! Glad you like; English is a language with a vast vocabulary. It's easy to paint
poems with it.

Gracias por pasar.

 

Yeah man... You r' right... when You r born evrybody enbraces you..

And when You die the grnd ripper gives you the last hug..

So maybe I should give U a hug too.. come overhere.

sweet.................tavo

 

Your words carry the beauty of a thousand, but they could not compare to your words quiet the same.:::sonreir1:::

 

Miyu , Yo Pecador , James :


Thanks all for being here, I appreciate your comments,
even though I'm soooo late with the -thx-



DEJAVU

 

Deja vu:

I`ve been suprised with your way to show a hug

see u soon

 

de absolutamente todos los que he leido en ingles, tu eres el mejor, haces que el ingles, pierda un poco de su frialdad. muy bien , fellicitaciones.

 

Muchas gracias; dicen que para realmente aprender un idioma se debe de pensar en el; pues entonces tambien pienso que para escribir poesia en ese idioma, se debe de sentir en el mismo, ya que si traducimos pensamientos en otro; no fluye igual.
Nuevamente gracias por el comentario. Abrazos.


DEJAVU

 

I enjoyed your beautiful poem, very well expresed, with skillfull use of imagery and melody. I have tried to translate some of my poems to English and you are absolutly right, is very dificult to do so without loosing a lot of the original inspiration. Is better to think in English and start something new that comes as a unit of thoughts and feelings and inspiration.
A pleasure reading you in any language.
Osvaldo

 

Thanks to you for the time,
it is a barrier; yes, but very reachable if you want to.

Saludos,


DEJAVU

 

Very elocuent and profound, tenderness in a harmonious way.
Very good.
Congratulations.
Alaric.

 

Sorry for the delay; I appreciate your time in my words.

Greetings,


DEJAVU